| "Unexpected Endeavors" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoohoo! Another update! *dances* I saw some typos here and there, but nothing big. If you need anyone to look over it for you, let me know. I can be your drive-by beta. XD I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it. Keep those chapters coming!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: MistressYume (NLI) On: August 23, 2006 08:33 EDT
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this is pretty cool! ^^ and jaken was a bit ooc in the last chapter....too nice if you ask me =p. but please update soon! i want to see what sesshoumaru-sama wrote!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(lni) On: August 14, 2006 01:42 EDT
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cant wait for the next chapter!!! LUV IT!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(lni) On: August 14, 2006 01:42 EDT
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cant wait for the next chapter!!! LUV IT!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 08:18 EDT
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I am really enjoying this. I like your approach to it. Thanks for sharing. D
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Reviewed By: GoodGirlJay On: August 02, 2006 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. i hope you update . can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(nli) On: July 27, 2006 06:09 EDT
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Luff It!! Cant wait to read more!! ^-^ Good luck w/ the move ;D
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 21:49 EDT
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I love your story. I like Kag/Sess stories better than Inu/Kag ones....needs more imagination....and makes for some humor when Inuyasha is involved! Update soon! I would love to read more....
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Reviewed By: Taiyoukai Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT!!! I love this story so far!!! please keep on updating! Its too good to just throw away!!! I cant wait to see what all you are going to do with this!!! Your style is wonderful and I can nly imagine what kind of twist your going to throw out!!! ~Taiyoukai's Lady
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Reviewed By: Cheyanne...previously known as FoXy_hOtTiE On: July 26, 2006 02:53 EDT
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Soo short....T-T...whaaaa! !:( Harumph!!!Its good. remember to update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(nli) On: July 19, 2006 04:10 EDT
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A bit OOC but still great ^-^ Cant wait to read more
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 22:24 EDT
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Well, good so far. Your characters are, um, in character ^_^; and that is nice. I look forward to seeing how you develop this story. What happens if the child is female?
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 10:27 EDT
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Good chapter! Please update soon!
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Title: Cooly
Reviewed By: Nina Angeles [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 02:54 EDT
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I really enjoyed it i cant wait for you to write more. you will write more, right? PLEASe. i'll be your biggest fan! :)
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 13, 2006 01:46 EDT
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That was great. I thought you kept everybody in character very well. You really ought to continue this. I want to see how things turn out.
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