| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 18:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Griffin, my heart breaks in all sorts of ways for him. I've taken to re-reading the other Purity stories and I just fall in love with them all over again. Thanks for being such a beautiful writer Sueric!!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 12:36 EST
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So he finally sees the truth that everyone else had known!!! I loved this chapter and I really can't wait to see what drama unfolds next!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 01:50 EST
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he finally admitted it aloud!! sweet!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 17:43 EST
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I wonder how long it'll take for Izzy's family to frustrate him enough to lock himself into the basement for a day? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 03:01 EST
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im ready for griffin to open up to isabella!!! update soon! : )
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 14:19 EST
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Yay! Gunnar's getting better! *sniggers* ah, that cloakroom story sounds wothy of it's own oneshot... Now, dissapearing youkai? Something to do with Alastair Gregory, i'd wager. Twists upon twists... Poor Griffin. Hvaing his house overrun by these nutjobs :P
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Reviewed By: SpikeRulesHell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 00:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gunnar's kinda an interesting guy... I mean, in Phantasm, he seemed like such a laid-back jokester, except for the (few) moments that he was completely serious. Now though, he seems to carry a few traits of the old Sesshomaru. He's incredibly prideful, and I see that he's a bit... I guess the best word would be conceited? After reading The Lesson, I can see where that might have come from. Interesting, though... Oh, and on your website forum, I take it posts over 1 year old are deleted? ...Great chapter(s), though, and I'm glad to see Griffin seems well on his way to accepting Isabelle as his mate. Write on ^^
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Reviewed By: free_freeme_free [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 18:41 EST
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Great chapter. I love hearing about Gunner's more colorful past. He comes off so stoic that one would think he spent his entire childhood in a library. I wonder if Gunner will find himself in very un-Gunner like situtuations when he finds his mate. It would be interesting to see the links he would go to to impress a woman, espeically since it seems he's never really had to work at getting anyone's attention. Also I've changed my name I used to be EVLONER.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 17:58 EST
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Ahaha, oh wow, that's funny what Morio, Gunnar, and Mikio did. I would be busting up! I like how Sam questioned Griffin in this chapter; I also liked how he was the first to know that she wanted to be a hunter. Hmm...I wonder when Griffin will tell Isabelle about that student.
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 14:19 EST
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Wow! I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 12:29 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Sami, she's adorable!! Keep up the excellent work and update soon please! ^_^
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Title: Wow...seriously, Gunnar's purified?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 19:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep trying to wrap my mind around this. At first, i thought it was his period of vulnerability but then I saw it was continuing. Seeing him so sick and weak is kinda sad. I kinda miss the cocky, kinda arrogant Gunsie, now. I saw your fanart of Gunnar on DeviantArt and he DOES look pretty feminine with strawberry blonde hair. Wanna talk about PRICELESS! Griffin asking, and I quote, "Who's she?" then "He's human," Griffin pointed out dubiously, "and he's . . . well, he looks like a woman." Three words in respnse to that, Sue... Help Me GAWD! I laughed till I emitted a rather masculine snort, startling 2 of my fellow PC lab neighbors. I'm STILL LMAO at the thought. You really have a knack for balancing drama, angst and humor in a real, believable way. Your writing is refreshing and never "status quo". And you never cease to keep me guessing. Anxiously awaiting your next chappie!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 11:08 EST
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sooo good so far! i hope izzy understands that griffin didnt try to kiss to hoe! i cant wait for them to actually get intimate!!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 06:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter i can't wait to see how it all turns out in the end. ANd it's nice to see Gunnars not always an ass LOL Happy Birthday hun :)
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 03:07 EST
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Sometimes you just can't say the right thing, and sometimes you could be the most articulate person in the world (demon or human) and would still seem to say the wrong thing. I guess, when they get things through to each other, it'll be a 'two wrongs make a right', but that could just be false like the phrase normally is. Keep up the good work, dark Oh, and Happy Belated Birthday!
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