| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tree-lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 23:32 EST
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Why do you have to be such a darn good writer?! I can't wait for the next update (this story is just so fantastic, it keeps getting better and better)!Thank you for all of the terrific reading material that you have given me to read : )
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 20:23 EST
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Sometimes a scar that a person gives them self is greater and deeper than any physical wound that anything else could give them. And sometimes it's that wound that makes it difficult to believe what others say. Keep up the good work and happy Valentine's Day, Dark
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 09:34 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: February 13, 2007 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty interesting chapter. Avis seems to be a done deal. Eaton sounded scary. The dressing room scene with the scars was enlightening. I was glad that "Jezebel" did not fall apart. The positive note at the end, where she told him he could go shirtless anytime, was a perfect ending. However, my favorite part, surprisingly was the "garland" discussion. It was so sweet! The chapter was great and I was happy to see it! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd just like you to know that most of the fanfictions I read these day are always compared to yours. Details mean the world to you and that's really how people let their imaginations so the required work. only thing i'd wish for, as of now, is a lil fanart of our favorite teddy bear
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 15:20 EST
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Yes, Griffin is definately eye candy lol. Hmm...so is Avis really did, or did he just slip into unconsciousness? Lol.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 14:12 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't believe Avis is dead. I wonder what's going to happen now?!?! I thought Griffin and Bitty had perfect chemistry in this chapter. I am really starting to wonder how Griffin got all of those nasty scars!!! Update soon please because I can't wait for more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 13:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems like things are about to get thick. I can't believe Eaton killed Avis, well yeah, I can believe it, but damn, when Bas and the rest of them find out about this, things are going to hit the roof. I'm wondering, when Eaton finds out that bitty has the docs, will Griffin be able to protect her and move accordingly with all the build up of scars and such. I hope so, I really do. You know Sue, I really love this couple, I do. Great work!!
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Title: *crys with happiness*
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 11:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now look, you've gone and made me cry. Thank you for posting this chapter... heck, ANY chapter! *sniffles* I love reading your work. I always knew Dr. Avis was working under someone else... he just couldn't have been the Big Baddie, as I call them. Damn, crying at work is never productive.
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Reviewed By: evloner On: February 12, 2007 11:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. That was so cute how griffit blamed the dog for eating the garland. I got a good laugh out of that scene.
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Reviewed By: Ookami_Mononoke On: February 12, 2007 00:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agh! I totally love this story, but I keep getting all twitchy for an update! Great job on all of your Purity works though, they're fantastic. *twitch* Gaah! There it goes again!!!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry for no review been reading way way to many Naruto fanfiction. Hey your writing is as good as ever mabye a tad better only on chap 14 now but plan to read the rest soon. Such a good job.
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 20:42 EST
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oh my gosh.... I've FINALLY caught up!!!!! i just have to say, i love your stories so much!! the characters are all so real and I can really picture them in my mind! i love stories that are vivid enough for it to seem like you're actually there with the characters, and you stories do that!! anyways, keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more!! =]
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 21:49 EST
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It's just cute to see that Griffin vounteers with the children. But I thought she at least suspected it when he brought in that boy with the broken arm that one time? I guess hearing about it and seeing it are two different things. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 30, 2007 23:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Relationship changes involving night visits, sexy bathroom shaving camraderie, "mornin' lovins," and crafts with Griffin and the preschoolers. How smoothly you moved from one subject to the next. It was great and heartwarming. Fluff extrodinaire indeed! We all need a shot occasionally. Thanks! Cynbad146
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