| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: March 21, 2007 10:21 EDT
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Has this been a hard story to write? This one seems like it is going slower than the other stories. Or maybe life has gotten busier. The first kiss. I am going to call it a quasi-kiss because it was a cure and not a kiss of emotions. When Griffin does kiss her on his own I think the fireworks will explode. We still haven't had Christmas with them yet either have we?
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 10:21 EDT
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Great chapter! I love all the hiccup remedies. And the kiss, loved it! So cute! Please update asap.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu On: March 21, 2007 10:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sometimes when I read your chapters, I have to wonder, 'Where did she come up with this idea?' Do you use things that happen with in your household? Or do you just have a damn good imagination? I myself would have never thought to use Hiccups as a way for them to kiss for the first time. It was actually innocent, sweet, and brilliant!! Griffin and Izzy are seriously and adorable couple, almost as adorable as Cain and Gin. I really like them, and I'm still hoping that things work out for the best. Great job as always and it really suck to hear that you broke a finger. Yeah, that really...really sucks!!
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 09:57 EDT
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The sweetest first kiss you ever wrote. Beautiful! I love Griffin. Hug from Brazil
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Reviewed By: nekosan On: March 16, 2007 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: March 16, 2007 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting...poor griffin...give him credit for at least trying to get her a present...but $300 for a disney thing...damn...it better be good...cant wait for the drama to start...update soon
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 09:57 EDT
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: March 14, 2007 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy your updates so very much. They never disapoint me. I love the way Griffin has begun to emotionally depend on Isabelle alot. I cannot wait to see if they will ever let each other see it. Izzy told Gunnar some hit home truths. WILL HE LISTEN? Would you mind reminding me how Mamoruzen got the nickname Gunnar?. Lovely chap as always. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 11:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Griffin!! If this was true life, I would have gone over there and beat those girls up myself!! (LOL) I'm really not like Gunnar's attitude as of late! Update soon please because I can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 10:51 EDT
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Awww, my first thought while reading this was.... damn, Griffin nervous much?! LOL Yay another good chapter! LOL
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu On: March 14, 2007 10:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You forgot me..(pouts). I know I reviewed last time, but you still forgot me. Anyway, we all make mistakes, so no worries (pouts a little more). Great chapter by the way. How many chapters will this fic be? I really like the slow go of bonding that's happening between Izzy and Griffin, but I think they need to step it up just a little, but not much. And Gunnar (yes, I still love him) needs to mind his own business and try following his own advice. Love the chappie!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 02:17 EDT
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Aww, poor Griffin; man, those girls piss me off about his scars. Yeah, he has scars, but he's still a person. (I almost put a human being, but uh, yeah, would have been wrong there lol.) Ooh, Gunnar pissed Izzy off, way to go Gunnar lol.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 23:58 EDT
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yay..an update!!! gunnar needs to calm down or he'll really push isabella away but i dont see him backing off anytime soon. griffin is sooo sweet! i cant wait until those two get together! hopefully its not that much longer ; ) update soon!
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: March 13, 2007 18:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very great chapter. Please update soon.
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