| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 10:23 EDT
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Wow I didn't see that one coming! But I have feeling we are going to hit a roadblock now and have to turn around to find other way. Maybe we will get lucky and be able to get by on the shoulder.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 10:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go bitty belle!! One thing though, did the condom break? I hope he doesn't regret this in the morning, it was beautiful and unplanned at least by him. But I can totally see why she'd just happen to have condoms in her night stand draw.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing and very sensual chapter. I can't wait to read more. Gorgeous!
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 01:41 EDT
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i'm loving every chapter!! can't wait for the next one!! and this has been bugging me.... I have a suspision that Griffin is the Bear Youkai in Purity: Revolution??? that would make a LOT of sense.... lol, anywho, great job and hope to be reading the next chap soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 22:38 EDT
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wow i just got it...his sister is the lil girl in the prologue so is he kioshi?? i think he is!!!...i cant wait for u to tie that in more!!! i almost forgot all about the prologue!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 22:35 EDT
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awww...he's finally opening up! yay! update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 21:22 EDT
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We finally have a connection to the prologue. I am happy to see it.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 18:55 EDT
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Hmm...Kumiko sounds really familiar...if only I could remember where lol.
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 12:22 EDT
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As always, love it! She finally got to see the basement and we finally got to meet the mystery woman!! :D
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Title: evloner
Reviewed By: evlonerhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 11:39 EDT
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Wow, you update so fast its hard to review the last chapter before you've already put out the next. I just knew Griffin would take Bell into his basement/cave. But I admit I was hopping he just grab her and kiss her instead. Oh well this just makes it so much more romantic when he kisses her next time. Now you've given us alittle more insite into griffin's past, I wonder what is the big mystery behind his scares. I'm sure he gotten them being the hero and trying to save a village. Maybe he was able to save everyone be his own family and now carries the guilt behind not saving his kin. Great job update soon.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 10:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done, I'm so glad he's finally letting her in. And Gunnar, is seriously a nosey nelly. He better stop cheating on me!! LOL, no, really, I'm serious!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 10:35 EDT
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Great chapter! I hope Griffin tells her about his past soon. Good to see that Gunnar was in this chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 09:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! SO, Griffin's past is slowly unraveling.... Keep up the awesome work and update soon please because I can't wait for more!! I thought the dollhouse was a sweet idea!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 19:33 EDT
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he was so mean!!! he better have something good planned to cheer her up! but i still love him : ) he just needs to tell her the truth and let her make her own decisions, especially before Gunner finds out and tells her. he should be the one to tell his story! UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON! : )
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Reviewed By: Tree-lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 17:57 EDT
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This is so good!! Do we get to see whats in the basement? Please, I can't wait!! That last chapter was too short. But you are amazing!
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