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| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] | | Pages (60): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Title: U ROCK!
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've rated this fanfic all 10's just cuz this author is a great writer. I've read all ur fanfics so far in the Purity series...and i think u should actually publish them. They r so emotionally moving and just wow. Thanks for writing such master peices of art and keep writing! cant wait for the next chapter!!!
| Reviewed By: Ayame87 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy and so sad; both at the same time! Poor Froofie/Charlie! Please, him be all right. But, Griffin said he would protect Isabelle. Slowly but surely we are progressing. As always, an amazing chapter to brighten up my day. You are truly talented. Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories with us. I am going to be so sad when the Purity series is over; I have become so attached to all of the characters.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 18:08 EDT
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Reminds me of when my cat had to have his tail cut off! Poor Isabelle, but on a brighter note; Griffin promised to protect her. YAY! Hmm....I knew that Alastair guy was going to do something quickly; hopefully he doesn't find out where Isabelle goes next; unless he's tailing her.
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 14:43 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, poor Froofie/Charlie!! I hope he survives! At least Bitty and Griffin are back together now... I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the fantastic work!! ^_^
| Title: Frantic, huh?
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 13:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kind of surprised that Isabelle would completely fall apart in a emergency "medical" situation since she's a trained doctor. I guess when it's your "family" it's hard to focus. At least Griffin put aside his need to be apart from her to be there for her now and promising to be there in the future! This can only bring them closer! :) *vandals hurting a pet - that's so low* I hope Froofie *Charlie* makes it!
| Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 13:24 EDT
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FROOFIE!!!!!!!!!!! OMG, i can't believe they DID that... whoever they are. I mean, it sorta got Bitty Belle and Griffin back together(the Promise To Protect!) but still... waaaah! *sobs*
| Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They're back together, yay!! I can see that the *hit is about to really hit the fan now!! Wonderful job as always!!
| Title: Wheee!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 12:35 EDT
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Thanks for the gradumacation gift of a new chapter! It's so nice to be officially and socially done with school... unless I want to go back for my Masters. :) However, I'm NOT done with your stories. ;D
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 23:18 EDT
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I have a feeling that one of your upcoming purity stories is going to revolve around Gunner and his pig-headedness being comprimised by a pair of pretty eyes. Keep up the good work, dark
| Title: Oooooo..
Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I can't wait until Gunner falls in love. I hope the woman is really strong. She's gonna need to be to deal with that arrogant man, lol. Great chapter. I hope Griffin finishes the translation soon, maybe he'll see her when he does.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 01:32 EDT
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Tone deaf? Ahahahaha!! That was a good chapter, I'm glad they were forced to drop the charges but I feel bad for Isabelle because she needs her Griffin as well. Hmm...I wonder when that guy is going to try to take Isabelle.
| Reviewed By: free_freeme_free [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 21:51 EDT
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Fabulous! So here's where the action must start. The bad guys are comming after Isabelle. I tried to join your form but could not log in once I registared. Maybe I have to wait awhile before I can registar?
| Title: Hey Sue!!!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 19:56 EDT
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Is it wrong that I think you updated this fic as a birthday gift to me? lol I'm confused on poor Izzy. Is she starting to pull a Gin on us? I guess she would having been rejected by her mate. So much to think about. I wanted to let you know I still read every update and I hungrily await your next!
| Title: This is kind of a late afterthougth, but...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 15:58 EDT
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CHAPTER 40: Collision. Okay, I can't help but wonder if Izzy is preggers; to quote the story: With a broken cry, Isabelle tightened her legs around him, brought her hips up to meet his, her body jerking, contorting, drawing him deeper, deeper. It was enough to break through the pressure, enough to wring a harsh growl out of him as he strained against her; as he felt himself coming undone. Now, when I reread this chapter, I realized that Izzy didn't sound like a virgin. I couldn't remember the chapter I read that gave me the impression, but, somewhere, earlier on in your story, I thought I read that she's 'experienced'--PLEASE let me know if i'm wrong. Okay, so, having said all that, and the fact that the 'act' was already in pre-climatic stages, when that section was written, I got the feeling the condom broke (and not that her maidenhead was broken through). If you could enlighten me, I'd appreciate it. TY, Sue! Oh, and this is one of the most beautiful love scenes i've ever written. Just wanted to let you know. Lata!
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 14:05 EDT
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Yay, another update!!! Anyways, I'm so happy that Gunner is finally showing his nice side again. I think this is going to be like a InuYasha, and Cain moment, just with Gunner, and Griffin insted. I hope that Gunner will be the one to talk some since into Cain. Oh yea, speaking of InuYasha, what is going on with InuYasha, and Kagome. And is Toga the TaiYoukia of Japan already, so Sesshoumaru is just the Inu no Tashio now? But I'm so proud of Gunner, and it is really sweet the way Gunner looks out for Izzy, it reminds me of Kich, and Gin. I knew when they was at the club, that the celebration had nothing to do with the McKinley case. I knew it was just Izzy's way of trying to pretend like nothing was wrong, and that she was not obessing over Griffin still. It's no wonder why Gunner is so bad on love, it do kinda make all the men in the family a little irrational, and he is no better, he is just like everyone else, just with Izzy, instead of a mate. Oh yea, in which 'Purity' are you going to do Gunner's story? I know you mentioned it, but I forgot. Oh, and what is goind to happen when Alastair sends his little scout out, only to find that Izzy doesn't have the research, are they gonna go after Griffin. And I wonder if the bags under Izzy eyes will be a sign to Gunner that Griffin is her mate, and i so will Griffin be able to accept the fact that Izzy is not better off without him, Griffin really does remind me of Pooh, he is such a 'silly ol' bear.'^_^ I think Attean and Maria will have to come, and talk to Griffin too. They might be the only one who Griffin will listen to. Attean seems very bright, and will probauly be the one to figure out that Griffin is just losing his will to live(lol 'Will to live' the song off of 'W.I.T.C.H). But I hope that he won't wait until it is almost to late, like Cain and Gin did. Okaaay, I think this is like the longest review I have ever left!! But update soon, and I hope you have a great summer!!!!!^_^
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