| "The Scent of His Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: neo On: August 16, 2018 00:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
out of all final fantasy stories this is the best story i have ever
read no joke its simply amazing i hope you can finish this
masterpiece one day.
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Title: PaleAngel_90
Reviewed By: Peter On: July 22, 2018 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving the story, though none of the links work. Perhaps if it
wasn't an inconvenience would it be possible for you to fix them,
please?
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Reviewed By: Sandywriter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2010 15:19 PST
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The way you wrote Kimahri's perspective just absolutely cracked me up. Well done! |
Reviewed By: Rain Nero On: June 03, 2009 07:49 PDT
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Wow, I've read all the way through what you have... and I have to say it's both well written and an interesting concept. It shows a side of Kimahri that many didn't think he had. I hope you write more soon!
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Title: Sensational, as always!
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you've come home with another sensational chapter of my favourite FF fanfic. People have looked at me strangely when I tell them my favourite pairing is Tidus / Kimahri... but when I tell them of this fic, it gets them interested, even if only slightly. You're the master, and I worship you. I hope your next chapter matches up to the wonderful works you've done so far. I'm still concerned about how you're going to end it all, since, we all know the ending of Final Fantasy X. *whimpers* Anyway, I'm sure you'll make it so great that I'll go to great lengths to actually print it out and give it a kinda book-like feel. =P
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Reviewed By: D.J On: March 09, 2008 00:14 PST
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Is it, eh... Normal to laugh through the entire fiction? Fist off - and don't feel offended hon - I'm not sure why I read it. This was just a little too, um, yeah.. well, it was a lot different than I read. Second, It was most deffinently not a pairing ever noted in my books And third... It was well written, amusing and.. oddly cute. ^^ Lovely story Hon, do keep up the good work.
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 17:16 PDT
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Well, that was certainly one hot bj and I love the way you describe it in detail. ^^ As for those pictures you had drawn, I was unable to view them using the links you provided. =( Everytime I try I get the message "404 Not Found." If they're available to view in the future let me know and in the meantime I hope you continue to write!
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Title: Chapters 3-4
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 23:21 PDT
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Wow, all I have to say is, with that latest chapter you got it right! hehe Kimahri never would have let anyoen else touch his mate. When he showed Tidus that he matterred more to him than his own people, than his own honor or life, he finally got through the barriers he put up. Kimahri is just amazing in this fic and Tidus is just as good. You write both characters extremely well and I hope you continue with where you're going. The intimate scenes are very passionate and vivid and you have great style. I'll be looking out for the next chapter. ;)
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Title: Spiffny
Reviewed By: Flaricka On: March 01, 2007 13:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, man.... That's great. That's one of the most original stories I've read so far. I love it; can't wait for more.
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Title: Bioxz... Supreme Master of Yaoi~!
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 14:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... like, I've been waiting for this update for so long, and now that I've seen it, I want more... Heheh... I can't wait to see the reaction of the other guardians when/if they find out about Kimahri and Tidus' partnership. Though I am starting to get a bit sad... I don't like how the ending of FFX is... too upsetting. I hope you find a way to make the ending one that will make me wish to have your kids, if I were female, or men could get pregnant. Super duper job, as always~!
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Reviewed By: DemiKusanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 18:11 PST
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wow. . . just WOW I had to read the chapter 4 three times, making sure that I got every detail of this new and exciting development, then I went back and reread the entire story twice. It is going to take days to remove the smile your story has placed on my face. You even went so far as to find the perfect place in the games story line for all of this to occur. Utter and complete perfection. What more can there be said about how much I love your writing. A few have voiced it, many are thinking it, and I will repeat it: Bioxz you are the Master of FFX Yaoi!
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Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 11:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that is definately something I will be waiting for. I seriously wanna know how the hell Tidus and Kimahri are going to explain this ones to the guardians. But hey even if this fic only has a few more chapters you could always write a one-shot sequel of when Tidus comes back to Spira he goes to find Kimahri. Kimahri is a little stunned to see him and hot smex ensues as Kimahri re-asserts his dominance over his mate. Always a possibility. I sreiously love this. I hope you manage to update soon. Arie Date.
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Reviewed By: Tasa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 10:31 PST
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Just read the story..... and i want more O.O Please!
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Title: MORE!!!
Reviewed By: DemiKusanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 16:23 PST
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*begs* please update soon, i'm will to give my left kidney if you do, okay well maybe not that, you want my 1st born?
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Title: I love it and I want MORE!!
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 03:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I seriously do. Though I have to wonder....... WHERE THE HELL DID THIS COME FROM???!! I mean seriously. I never even considered a relationship between Kihmari and Tidus. It just never occured to me that these two could mate at all. It seems so foreign. Like it's all the deranged dream of a mad man. And yet it fits. In the game, right after the events of the Al Behd Home Kimahri's attitude conserning Tidus changes a bit. And for some reason when I read about the interactions between Tidus and Kimahri the scene right after Operation Mi'hen keeps popping into my head. When you actually hear Kimahri's voice for the first time? I keep thinking about that and realize that it IS possible for those 2 to become mates. But I really wanna know what happens with Biran and Yenke and what Kimahri will make them do to apologize to Tidus. SO please will you update soon? Please? I feel that this story has a kinda sad ending coming and I wonder how you'll make Kimahri react when Tidus leaves. And will you ever have them tell the others what happened to them? About their mating? Sorry I'm just a curious person by nature. Feel free to ignore the idiot with insomnia. She reads this fic to keep tabs on them and to relax. UPDATE!! Arie Date.
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