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 Title: Sami_the_Deoxys726
Reviewed By: Bonnie A. Hartsfield  On: March 31, 2007 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Does the next fanfic have to be Chaos/GunEagle? Can't it be Chaos/Captain? I mean, he yelled at her like she was his wife or something like that; but he only did it because he cared. & the way he asked her to come with them to Shute's house, even though she wasn't allowed to leave the base. I mean, come on, you're making it sound like Captain in love with Chaos or something like that.
 Reviewed By: FeatherDragon  On: March 30, 2007 09:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need to work on your pick up lines GunEagle. Hotdog cook out! Yum. So I assume GunEagle gets the girl. Can't wait for the next one.
 Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 27, 2007 11:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think Captain should have got the girl... This was good. An excellent chapter to patch things up between friends.
 Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 22, 2007 07:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'v always wanted to pull that prank on my sister or cousin. But I found that filling a medicine syringe with dirty water from doing the dishes and squirting them works too. This was an awesome chapter. Very funny.
 Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: PrincessMoonShadow [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2007 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay as long as he goes back to normal! Love the chapter~!
 Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2007 07:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWW! The Baku/Chaos moment was so adorable!
 Reviewed By: FeatherDragon  On: March 20, 2007 20:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Could you make Captain lighten up slightly. He's OOC right now. It seems Baku and Choas finally connected. More please.
 Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: PrincessMoonShadow [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 20, 2007 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I absolutly loved it! For a suggestion maybe Captian could calm down alittle it just seems so OOC to me I can't picture him that mad ever.
 Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2007 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Fenn's here! Nice chapter, double fights are always good. Choas is in for it now. Hmm...it seems like her and Baku will be rather good friends.
 Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2007 12:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
THIS WAS AWESOME!!! Sorry I can't give suggestions. I'm terrible at that...x.O
 Title: Ideas... hmmm...
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2007 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Do you have any idea who will activate Chaos's Soul Drive? If not, I reccomend Sayla or Rele, just to mix it up a little. (For that matter, will her Soul Drive ever activate?)
 Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 15, 2007 12:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O Sweet! I can't wait to see what happens!
 Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 15, 2007 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
*rubs the back of my head* nope no suggestions here. THIS WAS AWESOME!
 Title: : )
Reviewed By: Sayal  On: March 15, 2007 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!
 Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: PrincessMoonShadow [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 14, 2007 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love it! I can't not wait for the next chapter!
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