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| "Oh! My Evangelion" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 08:22 CST
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Yea, this website doesn't seem to have many reviews even on the best of stories, especialy if you require people to be registered to review. I would really suggest writing some more before you decide to quit this fic. Demanding reviews to continue with only 1000 words never turns out well. Your lack of knowledge of the AMG universe also sort of shows. His wish should never been granted, you should not be able to directly wish to be a god. Ty reading some the many other AMG wish fics. Something subtle like, "I wish I had your job" or "I had a job only a god could do" are some well known ones.
| Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 01:19 CST
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an interesting start, let us see where you are going with this, it looks like it will be fun.
| Reviewed By: Apprentice to the King of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 11:42 CST
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it shows that you're new at this...and the other guy was right, you're not gona get any reviews here...FanFiction.net is a hell of a lot better. And if you need a little help with writing this, i'd be glad to help you too...i'm The King of Darkness' Apprentice there
| Reviewed By: player 0 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 09:18 CST
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You're new at this? It shows, no offense but you'll never get reviews here, trust me i've tried. got to www.fanfiction.net and you'll get some good feed back, i'm also there and i've written numerous AMG/EVA fics, my pen name is still player 0 there, so try and contact me when you get there, seeing as you've got potential, it'd be a shame to waste it here, plus its always good to meet someone with similar interests.
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