"Her and Us" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 12:13 CST Comment/Review: Cute little story. I like the introspection that you have into the twins lives and I also like how you keep them separate and don't fall into the pitfalls of confusing the two like I see with many writers. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: leia meroko On: December 16, 2006 22:45 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, this is very nice take. I like how you have Kaoru fit into things. you get a lot of Kaoru's view just right
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