| "Dances of Denial" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Review
Reviewed By: MarilynMonroe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story looking forward to some new chapters keep writing the romance is really good
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Reviewed By: XShootingStarX [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 14:35 CST
Comment/Review:
great fic. i love all the smexing in it ^_^ aww riku's in denial. cmon, Riku, we all know you can't resist Sora =3 some parts were a little confusing, like in one chap you wrote Kairi is sora's childhood friend, then another you wrote he didn't know her? looking forward to an update!
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Title: Cute!!!
Reviewed By: MarilynMonroe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is MarilynMonroe and I say yes keep writing it's so sexy and cute!!! SoraxRiku forever.
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Reviewed By: Lonely Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, it is enjoyable and very yaoi-ful. I do have to say though it is a little fast and seems a little empty. There isn't much detail and it seems like you leave of on a scene when there should be so much more. Other than those things I really like it. It is a good story.
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Title: Forgot to say it on the 'other' site
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I said it on A F F . N e t , and I'll say it here: Ya Need A Beta! Case in point, in chapter 2, Kairi & Sora have a mini-argument, but in 4 you say Kairi has no idea who Sora is. Unless you're having it as Sorra--I think that's how it's spelled for girls--is a common name, or that she just genuinely doesn't think Riku is bi . . . nah, Sorra being slightly common is plausible. But with the way you have it set up it's like Sora may or may not be . . . 'involved' with both of them . . . . which could create interesting issues all on it's own . . .Ah . . .I'm a sucker for SoRiKai . . . . Meh, until next update, Good Luck!
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Reviewed By: Tori_Kyuu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont think boosting your ego with reviews will make the reviewers very happy...as, from the looks of it, its been two months almost since this was posted. i wonder if you ever plan on continueing this? as im really curious as to what would happen next......... UPDATE DAMN IT! DX
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