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| "Karakuri" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoying, very interesting fic. I am not usualy one to like the super depressing stories, yet some how this one wasn't to bad so far. And sad as the start was, the future may not be so bad since the fourth is still alive, and hopefuly Naruto will have a family. All though I can only imagine the trouble an artifical being could cause in the future, if they hated a human demon vessel.. well lets not think about a puppet one. Then we have to worry about the attention of the more evil factions, I am sure Snake man would love to get his hands on Naruto as a viable imortal body. Not to mention that one puppet master that got exiled from wind country. You literaly left the gates wide open to countless possiblities, like will naruto age and grow? I can also see his natural chakra afinty being wood.. cause lets face it if his body does grow it be some version of wood chakra. I really hope you countinue this fic, but even if you don't I hope lots of others are inspired by this.
| Reviewed By: Vassago-Toxicity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have seriously never seen anything resembling this story. Sure, I've seen the Yondaime somehow live (usually via Sandaime doing Shiki Fuujin), Naruto being a science experiment, and other various plot devices, but I've never seen something like this happen. I look forward to see how this will turn out, and how different this will be from Canon.
| Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a strange yet fascinating concept. It's like some twisted version of pinnocio. I wonder what this Naruto's life will be like? Update soon!
| Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just wow...*falls back in chair staring at computer* That was true tradegy. Losing some things...friends..comrades...and children...just wow. Your good at this! you could continue this fic.
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