| "Equality Naruto" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Title: Enjoyable
Reviewed By: ýﺩýýßReece On: May 13, 2009 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, I was laughing through most of your story. It's a little sappy at some parts but... Meh, it's your story so who cares. Looking foreward to the next chapter, keep up the good work
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Title: gomen
Reviewed By: critic On: June 28, 2008 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for not reviewind earlier but i was too caught up in the story. Your writing is excellent! please keep it up and i look forward to reading more of your works.
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Reviewed By: Trife [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic I really enjoyed reading it. If you are still looking for anime Eps to watch I would suggest trying veoh.com
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 13:25 CST
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i have seen death note. and it is spelled uzumaki. what if you gave naruto a jutsu that mimicks the death note?
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 18:57 CDT
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Sorry to complain but that seems like the only way to get you to respond but I was wondering if you were going to update anytime soon and you once told me instead of leaving nasty reviews to get you to update I could just ask done that many times and you still never updated until I left a review cmplainning then you finally replied and then updated so like said I am sorry to complain but can you please update soon I know you have a life but I really really like your story and I miss reading it so PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 06:24 CDT
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I love your story and I CANN`T WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE and I just hope th pairri will be Naruto and Haku I really really hope you don`t make them just friends or like brother and sister so you can have it Naruto and Hinata pairring what I would really love to see the pairring be Naruto/Haku and Hinata anyways PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: sinsinman On: September 15, 2007 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how good friends Naruto and Haku have become. Very nice story. Gief new chapters :) I'll keep reading them till doomday
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Reviewed By: Myou On: September 13, 2007 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i really like you story its great im so looking forward to the rest of the story
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Reviewed By: demoncell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and the headband is called a hiate. Keep writing please and thank-you.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 02:43 CDT
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That was a really great chapter because I never experted that damn annoying Sakura was going to become a traitor now that made your story bettr now what would make it even better is to mke it offical that Naruto and Haku are BF and GF and then when they go back to Konoha then it could become BF and GF and another GF to make it Naruto having 2 girlfriends now that would be really really cool anyways thank you for updating this great story and don`t forget I do review and I don`t know why nobody else does but don`t forget not everybody on FF.net review I would if the god damn site would work for mesorry for rambling and complainning anyways hank you for updating again and please update soon please
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 08:48 CDT
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Rather interesting fic over all, glad your Naruto grew up some in later chapters, grew a little beyond the silly 'be hokage to a viliage that hates me' dream. One the main aspects of this fic I think could use a little work are perhaps the fight scenes. The jutsu names aside, you really should try describing the moves a little more other wise waht the people are doing doesn't always make sense, especialy the moves where people don't know the japanse for. You also seem to fall into the normal fan fic writing trap for fight scenes you need Naruto or anyone to lose in, distractions, thinking of strange things, underestimating their opents etc. If Naruto was truely fighting for his life, and the life of his friend I find it hard believe he forget to take off his weights, forget to take the fight seriously, or even his get lost in thought while sparring to lose. It's a valid means of turning the tide of a fight, but if you use it all the time it really doesn't paint a picture of a competant fighter, especialy some one wanting to be a ninja where life and death is a matter of alertness. Taking things seriously, and staying alert are perhaps the First and most important thing of being a ninja imo.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 06:45 CDT
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Just read the first chapter and felt the need to comment. Glad your one the authors who feels Naruto always putting up with the hate and never wising up is way to stupid of a thing to do, if nothing else self presentation insticts would kick in especialy from some one who plans to be a fighter. Bit dispointed you seemed to have clung to the 'hollow' reason almsot everyone uses for Naruto, to become respected by a town that hates him. I've never felt the viliage as a whole, or any the forms of goverment deserved Naruto's time. If he leaves the viliage to become a super strong ninja like a lot of fics do, it seems like a waste to go back to the viliage that taught him nothing but hatred. He could always get his revenge/respect by being a super cool ninja that they chased away and have them regret him being on some other towns pay roll, or eve free lance.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 02:45 CDT
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Ok like I said earlier I am sorry for being rude and also an ass ok I have a question how old is Naruto and how many years has it been since he ran away because so far what I read I would say maybe a year maybe and also I thought Naruto and Haku told each other there secerts in the early chapters oh well Please PLEASE update again soon I love the story and I miss reading it oh and thank you for updating
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 23:57 CDT
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I am sorry for bing rude and also an ass the e-mail you sent me earlier saying if I wanted an update I could have asked well I shouldn`t have left a nasty review just to get you to reply but I hate to say it but that kind seems the only way to get you to reply because I had e-maied you atleaset 2 or 3 or maybe 4 times after you e-mailed me telling me you were going to update FF.net more and less here since you don`t get hardly any reviews here not sure why this is a really really good story and yes I do miss this story and I still wish Naruto and Haku hook up to be the main pair and maybe there could be a three way pairring with Naruto,Haku and Hinata anyways thank you for updating but could you please keep updating here if you do I promise I won`t be rude and also an ass again
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 15:00 CDT
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I really really like this story but since you e-mailed me telling me your going to slow down the updates here on MediaMiner but your going to update more on that god damn piece of crap FF.net site and well since your last update was in june and none since I take it you were full of crap when you said you were going to slow down updating here so what you really meant was your never going to update here again so screw it there are way better stories and way better author than you out there to bad and at first I thought you were a really good author I guess I was wrong oh well
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