| "Halo 1/2" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice over all, like other people have said it would be nice for you to fill in some the blanks about what ranma is doing in the Halo universe. Other then that I suppose my only real complaint is how fast things seem to go. You could spend a little more time describing things palces and people, not to mention randm character thoughts to make things seem more real. Lastly of course you could use a little more dialog, and less factual. I know this is military base and such but dialog that doesn't always have to be short as possible.
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Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME fanfic. Very original premise, I can't wait to see more! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: mike17349 On: May 06, 2007 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original can't wait to see how it all pans out!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mian_toris On: May 01, 2007 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good potential. There is a lot of ways this story could go. I highly recommend posting it at http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/. As for how he got there are you going to go with one of the classics? Amazon artifact, Happi's revenge, Akane...
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Reviewed By: Waffer On: April 29, 2007 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good but i wonder how you will fill in the blanks as to how ranma came to be where he is now...eh oh well.
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