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"Count Back Down from 10" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Title: heartless
Reviewed By: Zaara the Black [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 03, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it makes me sad to kill them when i play the game
 Title: O_O . . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 29, 2007 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Creepy, and yet . . . it makes me feel sad for the Heartless too. Keep this up, but you might want to re-read it. It was just minor grammer stuff. But this was good. It sort of reminded me of somethings Sora said after he got over being a Heartless. And I think it's nice with what comes after 8, since 'Ansem' and eight have almost the same starting sound, and 8 almost alludes to Ansem controlling the Heartless.

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