| "Fall of the Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: judgeman On: December 17, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it suck it'shorrible!!! syke!!!!! this story was thight and off the chain i like it and i would not of read it if i had seen that yaoi at the end but i liked it.(oh and incase u dont undersant what tight and off the chain mean, it means really good and intresting.) my e-mail is showstopper573@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Mor1814 On: August 22, 2003 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just re-read this fic and I'd forgotten how wonderful it is! I love the interaction between Vegeta and his family and I really love the way you have Goku and Vegeta's relationship developing. I can't wait to see where you go from here. I also can't wait to see where you go with the relationships between Spice and her family members. Keep up the great work! I can't wait for the updates. :-D |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: July 17, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been patiently looking for updates to this story and will continue to do so until you can update. You can count on at least one loyal supporter. Besides, gotta give you credit for having good taste in music. Got me into this music too! lol |
Reviewed By: Bitter Battler On: June 03, 2003 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAGH!!!! I just ran across the fic, it was going so well, then ends in a heavy cliffhanger. Your style of writing is intense, both comedicially (have no idea if it is a real word or not, would have to dig through boxes to find my dictionary) and angsty.
Had to stop myself from laughing out loud at the funny parts. Not a good thing to do when reading after midnight. Please continue if possible. |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: July 19, 2003 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
*smiles* well, well, nice to see you back to this fic! But I also like the others you are cooperating with Dark Serapha. |
Reviewed By: atshi On: March 01, 2003 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
heya! i really, really LOVED that fic until to the chapter vegeta and kakarotto lost their child! i mean i REALLLLLY LOVED it!! and still love' it! and i liked spice as well! but somewhen i got lost in all ur newly created characters - i mean its kinda difficult to deal with all of them as a reader who has never heard of them before! plus it gets boring if the reader cant visualize them like the main characters. with spice it was okay - u introduced her very well but all the others were just too much for me and i lost interest. hmm...... its like u started that great V/K fic and somehow ended mixing it up with too many other storylines. ...yeah... i think u got it by now. *sweatdrops*. it was wierd to read so much about a dream spice was having or the problems her brother dealt with and nearly "nothing" about kaky having lost his baby also. i expected more... but this shall not end in a "bad" review! i loved the first 5 hours reading!! u hear me?! I LOVED'EM!! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!! THis is sooo good! ONe of the best i have read!! Awww how can Vege be so cruel to kaky!? Anyway this is great!! Please update soon!!!!! I cant wait!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: vegeta On: February 06, 2003 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
i havent read the entir thing yet so... be so far this is really cool! and i sound like an idoit. oh well. i like anima, horror, and sharp objcts. hee hee. i really sounding like kaorot. and i spelled that wrong. 0.o whatever good story so far |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 12:36 CST
Comment/Review:
oo oo this is nice! i likes! |
Reviewed By: RoamingLake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 00:37 CST
Comment/Review:
i have been reading your story everynight this week. i just cant seem to stop. : ) it started really good and kept on being good.
i cant wait till i can find the time to read the rest of the fic! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 05:00 CST
Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah the cliffhanger tortures me |
Reviewed By: anime kikei On: January 05, 2003 14:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I just read this for the first time (just found it) and I LOVE IT! Please continue, it has been so long since you updated, are you planning on continuing? You definitely should!
I love the character interactions/plot is original (don't get enough originality in the fanfic world.) I need to know what is going to happen with Spice's character! (she's so cool :)
If you continue I will worship you!
Thank you! |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter hell, I love the whole story this story is so good please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaoru27 On: November 02, 2002 20:10 CST
Comment/Review:
You are a horrible person making us wait like that. I didn't really like the idea of male pregnancy when I first read it, but you made me like it. Damn you for making us wait but you are an awsome writer so keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Fate On: November 02, 2002 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh fuck you! O.O I enjoyed reading this waaaaaaaaay too much! -clings to you- I LOVE YOU! n__n I can't wait for more, and if there isn't coming anything soon, I will find you, and beat the shit outta you untill you do! Understood? >> Good ^^
P.S. You can assure I am your biggest fan! I read chap 1 till chap 30 TWICE x) |
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