| "Naruto's Spare Time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
If this story has already been written, then why hasn't it been updated since April?
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: Rowinr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 10:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am sure i am not the only one who is looking forward to the story but I just wanted to understand you said that you will update at 9 - 10 mnt right so tech there should have been one last night??
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Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 10:38 CDT
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Can wait till you port the first chapter. If you don't mind me asking why aren't Kin, TenTen, or Temari involed in this story, you don't havce to answer if you don't want to.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 03:18 CDT
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Bit wierd to post a note saying your going to post a story.. Have to say I don't fully apreciate the pairings either, Tsunade a 50 something year old women with Naruto and younger girls with Jirya? Plus I am always of the opinion Sasuke needs to die alone in a ditch some where, he doesn't deserve any women. This story might turn out okay but so far I am a little skeptical
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Reviewed By: Bonesofthegods [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is always a good idea to have at least a few chapters done ahead of what you have posted, just in case real life interrupts. But it is almost unheard of to have it completely finished beforehand. Congrats
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