| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Title: Hot as Hades
Reviewed By: LadyLilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The lemon was perfect. I commend you lots and lots. The only thing that really disturbed me was that you used the word "cock" just a little too much...
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the way you've styled this alternate universe and so far, I think you've kept Ichigo and Rukia in delicious character. That said, I adore the way you've weaved in other characters from Bleach, Orihime and Ishida are killing me and Kenpachi is so right as a Lou. But the greatest thing has to be the way the relationship between Ichigo and Rukia is playing out!
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN'S THE NEXT ONE COMING! I LOVE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING! IT CAPTURES THEYRE RELATIONSHIP AND ATTITUDES BEAUTIFULLY! :)
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I was re-reading this chapter (can't remenber what number) and it occur to me that Gin sounds black with his way of talking! I love it! I hope you updated soon I will be waiting!
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 11:42 CDT
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Hey you wouldn't know me as i dont post much, but i have been a fan of yours since the beginning, your stories are and always have been the reason i check this site daily to see if you have updated your stories or added something new, only had 1 story i really didn't get into but the others i enjoyed greatly, great work with what you have done in this story and in your others, it will be a sad day when you stop writing about Ichigo/Rukia so i hope that day is still a long way off...keep it up, you make alot of people's morning/nights more enjoyable then they were before. ~Luste
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good! I can't wait for the next one!! I think the line also has to do with her not wanting to open up to anyone again but its definitly not harrassment.
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 10:57 CDT
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Ichigo is not harrasing Rukia! If she really didn't want it then she would stand her ground and he would of stop! But she is leading him on by almost having sex with him in the car and been flustered and blushing when he touches her! Rukia obviously enjoys it her argument is that its not professional for them both to have romantic relationship when they are working together! Like Laurie said in any other alternative universe she could scream sexual harrassement and he be out of the job but she doesn't want to!
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 10:33 CDT
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I don't really like Ichigo harassing Rukia instead of simply teasing her *hides from all the people who do like it* but it's still fun to read ^^ The part about Hitaugaya-kun being a D.A. (had to look up what this is ^^') is a nice idea. Well, like every other characters part in your story xD
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Title: *throws a chair out of the window*
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 07:00 CDT
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and when I come home form a tiring day and see your post...especially such a good one...I simply rejoice! Rukia is my girl...I wil just get that line of hers and..never mind=/But she will break, oh yeah she will and I can imagine what kind of a thing is waitng for us in the store*grins evilly* Well I hate it when people tell me to update soon(like we are able to write 24/7) but I understand them when Im reading such fics like yours *sighs*so I will just hope(upon hope) that you will update soon
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the dialogs in the chapter ;D
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Reviewed By: Riel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love this story!! You're writing style is so good, keep up the GREAT work. I can't wait for the next chapter. Its really good.
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 21:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
My golly! If i could just rip THE line for rukia, believe me i would! And that venus and mars dialogue, damn love it girl! Poor Ichigo! having a boner, like just about always, must be quite painful. Ohhh pure torture! I don't know what i want more, for rukia to cross the freaking line or to just continue harrasing ichigo like that. love your story. so, um, where's the next chap? XD
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 19:14 CDT
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I love Rukia's logic! "There is this line" What line Rukia girl you just cross it? *sighs* She needs a reliaty check but then again I think she will last for another two to three chapters! Awesome job though! I'm sad to hear Ishin die!
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Title: that was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no words! I am speechless! That was awesome I can see Rukia is going give in soon there is only so much she can stand! I will be waiting for the next chapter with batted breath! So awesome! I love it!
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Title: ....After picking my jaw off of the floor...
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 18:33 CDT
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Good lord girl that was an INTENSE chapter! This was my favorite line: "That's just like a guy," Rukia spat, "Talking with your dick instead of your brain." "That's just like a woman," Ichigo countered, "Analyzing your emotions instead of actually feeling them." Simply loved that line. Why is Rukia tourting herself? Give into the pleasure girl... I know I would it was Ichigo... sigh... (ooookay...now I'm fantacing over a fiction animation character, I know I need help now.) Thanks for the quick update. gg
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