| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2010 11:31 CDT
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I really liked this story. Good drama and character development. My favourite character was Kenpachi, so awesome! But my favourite story is totally Odalisque.
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Reviewed By: theoryofaninvisibleman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2009 19:52 CST
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Pal i absolutely was elated by this story of yours. It was completely and utterly amazing. You have such a way with the characters that was fantastically entertaining.
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story more than Odalisque! Keep up the great work :]
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Title: Review for Ch.3
Reviewed By: intercostalspace [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it just me or was there really chemistry between Yumi & Rukia in this chapter? If he is gonna die in the following installment, i wished they kissed and you could have just given an excuse like they're both tired or something like that. hehehe :D
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Title: Murder my heart
Reviewed By: leila307 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats was one of the best stories I have ever read. Ofcourse all of the ones were written by this same author. It had everything in it, suspense, comedy, passion.. all in one.. you did great! I hope you write more stories.. personaly I loose sleep just reading your stories.. BUT its worth it!
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah, I forgot. Here are your ratings. *applause* XD
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Title: OMIGOSH!
Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 09:22 CDT
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Oh wow wow wow-- and I've finally finished this story! Well, I finished it yesterday, but I used my PSP (since my laptop is broken and the family desktop isn't always available), and couldn't really review on it 'cause typing on that thing is a nightmare. But still-- WOW! This is like, the best IchiRuki story I have ever read. OMG, you are a pwn all writer and I simply cannot WAIT to read anything else you write! My head is still spinning slightly from the words 'Rukia' and 'pregnant' in relation to each other... I can understand how poor Ichigo felt! But aww, and again, AWWWWW! And, so true, the, ah, sex scenes in this story are probably the greatest ever to see the light of day. And, you know, I like nice Ichigo. He has alot of depth to his character, which means writers can mold his personality into nearly anything and still make it believable. Lol, I truly believe Ichigo can be as sweet as pie, deep down, or a total uncaring and selfish bastard (as in She Will Be Loved). So, you know, it really doesn't matter about anything "OOC" because you, the most brilliant IchiRuki writer I happen to know, can make it work, regardless of the circumstances. Yay for you! XD --Caz
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sheds an invisible tear* I can't..believe its finally over...All I have to say is just WOW that was simply one of the greatest piece of fanfiction (if not literature) I have read in the longest time. When reading fanfiction you expect mediocre writing and a somewhat interesting story after going through so much junk. You rarely expect to find something so compelling that can keep you interested. Yet, what you have created here is something more than that. I felt as if I was reading an action mystery thriller romance novel. Looking at your word count, you've written over 250,000 words! That's like me finishing an actual book! You know, I was never a fan of AU, but you have been able to write so well and diligently that I completely changed my mind. Your plot structure, characterization, emotional context, character interaction, Hot smut, and overall development of the story is just simply something I would expect from an author with published works. Granted you don't even have an editor (or beta in this case) you were able to keep grammatical errors to a minimum when you've written so much and it didn't take away from the story at all. This has to be one of the greatest (if not the greatest) IchiRuki fic I have ever read. Actually, scratch that. In all my time reading fanfiction (and I've done it for a number of years across various fandoms) this has to be one of the most enjoyable, exciting, and wonderful reads I have completed. I simply can't put into words how much I tremendously enjoyed reading it. I thank you for being able to showcase your brilliant writing talents by creating this great piece of work. It was simply one of the best times I spent reading on the internet. As for your epilogue it was a fantastic ending. I loved the interaction that Ichigo and Rukia had 3 years after marriage. And that hostage situation? Simply stunning. I think my jaw dropped when I read that Rukia was pregnant. You really pulled a fast one there! But alas, the ending was simply great. Both of them look to be very excited about their future together as they build a family and live their lives. All I can say is that you did a great job from beginning to end developing their relationship. Very well done. I don't know what else I can say. I mean you've just done a marvelous job and I guess the only thing left to say is I hope you continue writing great IchiRuki fics and I recommend looking into a career or even as a side project writing your own original works. You've got that much talent and potential. Once again, I thank you for this brilliant story and honor you with quite possibly my longest written review to date XD! This fic was truly deserving of it. Congratulations and cheers!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha you really have a talent for smut huh? Well I don't think that's really a bad thing because I enjoy reading it by a great author so keep it up! XD! The ending was nice as well. A small little marriage ceremony to seal the deal. I totally enjoyed it all the way through. Now just remains the epilogue. Sad to these this great fic almost end. T_T
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was some court meeting! I guess all those Law and Order marathons came in hand huh? XD It was very creative and realistically believable. You did a great job and I really enjoyed Rukia's testimony. She finally admitted her love for Ichigo and I that was a such a sweet and tender moment. Can't wait to see the last chapter before the epilogue. Such a wonderful story this has been!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was some chapter!! You really know how to build the romantic tension between the two. I love the emotions that you are able to display with your choice of words. You are a very talented writer!! I can't wait for Rukia's reaction about the ring and then the testimony she's supposed to give. This is has been one of the greatest reads not only for IchiRuki, but for most of the fics I've read all together.
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Er first off I apologize for the double review. I think my Internet froze and I accidentally sent it twice. Anywayz, this chapter may have been a "filler" from the IchiRuki stuff, but the legal side of it was quite cool as well. I liked Hitsuguya playing the defense lawyer, it suits his character. All the law and legal proceedings were fascinating. Can't wait till next chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God damn that was an EPIC and INTENSE chapter!!! I really really enjoyed it! You portrayed Aizen as a cruel bastard so well! And when Ichigo napped and hit him I was like "Oh yeah about time!" XDD Really awesome chapter and the climax was good!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God damn that was an EPIC and INTENSE chapter!!! I really really enjoyed it! You portrayed Aizen as a cruel bastard so well! And when Ichigo napped and hit him I was like "Oh yeah about time!" XDD Really awesome chapter and the climax was good!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was so freaking awesome!! I loved the IchiRuki interaction. You do their characters so well and lovingly that it's just a great read! And the ending was just like "WTF Happened????" I have a feeling Aizen did something to Rukia. Can't wait to see exactly what!!
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