| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Rukia's reaction was definitely a surprise to me (although I did see something at the beginning about a ring should bring happiness). You finally updated and I must say that it was worth the wait! Please update with another fantastic chapter! I checked every 2hrs today for this chapter and just read it at 12:30am! Ichiruki Love!
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 23:18 CST
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Good chapter. I love this story. Poor Ichigo I felt so bad for him. At least Rukia didn't give him back the ring - so there's still hope!!:)
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I know you're brilliantly making the next chapter, but I can't wait! This series is full of suspense and I adore it sooo much. I've been checking the site everyday for an update! :( Don't rush though, you always make great chapters leaving me on the edge every time!
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 10:19 CST
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"a high school student just finished with puberty" xD That's so funny, it makes me remember why Hitsugaya-san is my favorite character ^^ It was worth the time waiting for his appearance
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 08:01 CST
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why is it that i am always the last one to see the newest chaps? honestly, there are time when i can't open the newer chaps in this story. something wrings with MM, i think. anyway, WOW! the intensity of the previous chap, Aizen being that close to hurt rukia physically had me holding my breath. i was like, 'dammit ichigo, where the hell are you?' and something like, bastard aizen, get your filthy hands off rukia' i could feel the intensity of ichigo's detyermination to get rukia back. to save her. and my god, he went into the fire just to save her. woohoo! and damn! the way you described ichigo while waiting for rukia to awaken, it's exactly the same thing in real life. i should know, i deal with it, that exact situation or situations in real life.working inside ahospital, i can almost see it. and all that law jargon was amazing. can't believe you just got that out of watching law and order. you are trully an amazing writter. i am such a fan.
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is my fav chappy coz I can feel the meaning of love. Glad you like all the videos I recommended to you. If any interest video I will share to you Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!!! i really liked this chap!! i really really really want to read more!!! so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! UR AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: IchigoBLEACHcake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 01:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that last chapter "Awake" Really hit me. My sister was in a coma after a car accident. I just remembered how badly me and my family wanted her to wake up. Her doctor told me to talk to her to try and get her to respond. I just remember talking to her for hours about the things we used to do when we were younger. It was really...I don't know really how to describe it...but when she just wouldn't respond when I would talk to her, well you captured that with Ichigo so well. This chapter...wow...it just made me cry. I'm really glad you captured the feelings exactly. Thank You From a still hopeless fan ~Ichi
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! Please update soon! I waited all week for this! Kudos for posting early! YOU MURDER MY HEART! I'm left on the edge of my seat! I check everyday to see if there's any chance that you updated earlier than usual...For a second there, I thought that Rukia was gonna notice the ring on her finger as she caressed Ichigo's hair. Did he remove the ring or leave it on her? AHHHHHHHHHHH! LOVE ICHIRUKI!
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 21:28 CST
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WOW. I read the two latest updated chapters at a go and I'm now kinda out of breath. The build-up to the climax where Aizen tried to set fire to Rukia was really, really well-done. And your portrayal of Ichigo in all his different emotions just does it for me (: I absolutely adore the way Ichigo expresses his love for Rukia ! And yes, I also appreciate the way you've fitted in the rest of the Bleach characters, a very nice touch indeed! So as usual, can't wait for the next chapter, it is getting better and better !
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just leeps getting better and better!!! I love this so much!He loves her!!!! and she is okay! Can't wait for the next one, put Aizen's ass away!
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Title: oh, ah....
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god if Aizen wont try to kill her in the next 36 hours I will die happy! ohhhh that was sooooooo sweet, I mean the ring and the words he said *sighs* its just amazing how you write so simply yet so elegantly and amazingly. thats the real nature of your writing, its undertsandable, clear and flawless=)
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yayayaayayayayayay!!!!! Aizen's ass is in jail! Ichigo loves Rukia and Rukia loves Ichigo! *cries* I love it! I just love it! Great job!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 14:31 CST
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Yay! Rukia is okay!!!! I loved the cameos you placed in the fic with the other Bleach characters. And I don't consider this a filler, actually. This chapter is about the most important chapter in here; it gives us relief on wether Rukia survived, Ichigo made his confession that he loved Rukia (even though she was alseep) and We know that Aizen is behind bars. Yay! Great chapter! I hope we're not getting to the end now... It would be good if we got the actual Grand Jury scene, and the court scene were the DA ( I can't write is name, but you know who I'm talking about) makes a huge dramatic opening/closing arugements just they do on Law & Order. Gee... this fic has so many yummy gems! Until next update!
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Title: The sequel to intillegent review 2! The crazy stalker strikes back!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 14:40 CST
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Ok So I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS CHAPTER! IT WAS SO AWESOME! We got so much love from Ichigo that I was ready to die in my chair. Rukia really broked down in this chapter. And I ABSOLUTELY HATE AIZEN!!!!!!!!!! But... surprisingly he was the one spouting the most romantic lines about Ichigo and Rukia in the whole fic. O.O yes I know he is insane but what he said really made me go 'Awww!' even though Rukia was about to die! Yes the rabid fangirl has come back. AWESOME CHAPTER GIRL! YOU TOTALLY BLEW ME AWAY!
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