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Reviewed By: MayFeiScarlette On: December 09, 2009 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue, we all want more. :)
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2009 19:11 CDT
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I really wish you would continue this story. I think it's on a great path and I want to know more.
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Reviewed By: Mayfei On: May 14, 2009 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has almost been a year since your last update, maybe you'd be willing to continue in your free time?
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Title: is it done? nooo!
Reviewed By: nia91 On: March 28, 2009 09:29 CDT
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hope that was not the end of the story!!! if there is more or yr thinking of adding more pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls do!! i loved this story keep writing good stories
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Reviewed By: Aura996 On: January 17, 2009 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the idea that you have for this story. I hope that you update again soon, but I know that life is very busy and often times not easy to get these things done.
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Title: UDATE SOON PLZ
Reviewed By: animelovera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon plz i have nothing left of the avatar since it has ending on NICK this story is all I have now plz plz plz update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: minmay7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 19:53 CDT
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I hope you update soon. I really enjoyed your story--you are excellent at capturing the characters personalities.
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Reviewed By: meterbroken On: June 29, 2008 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zutara is everywhere, and while I've seen similar plot lines, you have given this a unique spin. Zuko's pent-up passion is only released in bed, and I'd like to see him get upset over something trivial. Someone once wrote a fan fic where he had a weakness for lemon drops, and Katara ate them all. Something like that would work well in your genre. I think she would be relieved to find out something personal and human about him. And she could tease him. I love what you've done and I've been checking for updates every week for months. Your description of Katara's guards is hilarious, and your description of "the morning after" made the characters real in my mind. Please write more. There are less than 10 fan fict writers for Avatar that make me want to read more, and you are one of them! I know that life can disrupt writing time, but you are talented enough to push things aside for your writing! (and I'm greedy and want more!) Thank you for this story.
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Reviewed By: Kurojin On: June 21, 2008 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really liked this chapter. Very much excited to read the nesxt one. I don't think that you added this chapter to AFF.net yet. I usually read it there. PS I like turtle ducks! haha
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: aura9969 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 23:31 CDT
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Alright, at first I admit that I thought that this was just going to be another poor Katara married off to a stubborn Zuko fic and that's it, but you definately have caught my attention. Keep it up and update soon.
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Reviewed By: ouranlover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best zutara fanfic i've ever read. Keep it up and update fast!
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Title: want more
Reviewed By: dandy On: June 04, 2008 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story and hope it is not truly completed.like the title says:want more.its very interesting story.
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very pleased to see an update on this story. You've made both characters believable in this AU/CONT, and your writing style is interesting in this one. I started reading it at FF but I find MM easier to deal with (reading-wise) so was VERY happy to see it here. You've set the groundwork for it very nicely, and it'll be interesting and entertaining to see where you take it. Thank you muchly for the intriguing story, hope to see more on a more frequent basis. :D
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 13:12 CDT
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I write in another fandom, but I wanted to let you know that your story has engaged my interest. You write with brevity that manages to convey imagery without being terse; your characterizations of Katara and Zuko as reluctant lovers just learning to deal with each other is well orchestrated; the story line so far is interesting. Thanks for the diversion!
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 10:56 CDT
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I am enjoying this story so much, and I only found it this morning. Please don't tell me that you aren't continuing this one. I really want to know more and to see where this story goes, but it says you haven't updated since January. If this story is done, I'd like to know now, so I don't get my hopes up. If you are continuing, then I will anxiously await a new chapter!
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