| "The String" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: The String
Reviewed By: CocoaAddict On: January 16, 2009 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow,this is such a great story and so adorable.Your quite the talented writer.You've actually made me totally love this pairing.I hope you'll write more,soon.Pretty please write more.(Also your authors notes are so funny,lol.)
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Reviewed By: Kattao On: May 16, 2008 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
HI Sarah . . . again.Any way great story and the authors notes were so funny! especially the one where Lucy swallowed the lego and both of you were running around in circles and screaming. That would be weird if that acually happened. yet hillarious.Bye! see ya june 1st! and I hope you have plenty of sugary food items but just in case you do not i will bring my own sugary food items along with weird and random things and my clothes.Man! I still can't gelieve I get to stay with you guys for a month!what is to days date? lets see . . . the computer doesn't want to coropperrate. I would shoot it with a really kick-ass gun but then my conection to the outside world on those boring after-school afternoons and weekends would be dead (plus this isn't my computer. It's my aunt's and she would kill me if I killed it). I know this is off subject but one of these days Kenny is going to meet my shoe . . . and my screwdriver . . . and Fred . . . my grandma's staple gun . . . and my gun . . . and my almost dead cell that is out of minutes and I anoyed people on the bus with it by playing recordings over and over agin of someone whistling and rcording of the highest note on a pan flute.FLYING MONKEYS!Flying Monkeys eat monkey noodles.Uhh . . . sorry about the random ness. This review is only random because i'm bored, I've had milk, kettle corn, I feel like shit,and it's almost midnight. Al of those combined can make hyper or random or both depanding on the sitchuation.Bye -Kitty
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the questions, now I have something to write! (^_^) I'll try to answer them in the next chappie. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwww, sorry you think your chapter is crap but...Awwwww ^_^ Its so cute! Geez, I can' help grinning right now. Hope the writers block goes away and hope to see another chapter soon. Oh yeah, does Ichigo have a little crush on Orihime or is he thinking its gonna be weird that two of his friends are going out or is he going to feel pressured to say something to Rukia? Just a few questions that happened to pop up in my head. Anyways see ya
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 18:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Update, update, update! Sorry, I'm impatient =) And adding this story to my favourites. Obviously.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, hows it going? The chapter was good but kinda short. But hey with all the holidays and stuff going on I can understand. Hope to see another soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, Uryu is blushing like crazy! So cute so far. So when will the others reveal their crushes too? Update soon.
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