| "The Sister Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where you're going with this. I'm VERY interested in the Mirai Trunks/Asuke romance you have going. I'm wondering when you're finally gonna get Mikomi and Gohan together too. And I'm curious as to what you're going to do with Videl, if you actually do something with her, like kill her. lol. So many questions for you to answer! I liked the party idea. Nice touch. ^^ I'm ready for some romancin! Bring it on! I'm waiting on that update, chica! |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where you're going with this. I'm VERY interested in the Mirai Trunks/Asuke romance you have going. I'm wondering when you're finally gonna get Mikomi and Gohan together too. And I'm curious as to what you're going to do with Videl, if you actually do something with her, like kill her. lol. So many questions for you to answer! I liked the party idea. Nice touch. ^^ I'm ready for some romancin! Bring it on! I'm waiting on that update, chica! |
Reviewed By: Gohana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work! I almost feel like I'm watching the actual series, with some minor differences. My only criticism is that Asuke and Mikomi were welcomed rather quickly--I expected there to be more questioning and suspicion, but what you did seemed to work, regardless.
I was amused at how overdramatic Vegeta was being about the strangers' arrival, claiming that he, Gohan, and Mirai were the only ones standing between the newcomers and world domination. |
Reviewed By: Gohana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Mikomi is so annoying, I can't wait until she meets Vegeta! It will be amusing to see how she tortures him and the others as she does Asuke. I think they are both amusing characters, and I like their disagreements. It's entertaining to see the two opposites divided on just about every issue. |
Reviewed By: Gohana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 18:43 CST
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I'm glad I took the time to read the prologue. It further peaked my interest in the story. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest On: October 15, 2002 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest On: August 30, 2002 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reviewing! I really liked this update and would write more but I can't or I won't have time to start The Truth before my next class. So...um...update again!-JB |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story in FF.NET. I thought it was pretty funny. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well another great chapter. I wonder what will happen next? And what's up with M. Trunks and Asuke? Oh well I guess I'll know soon. I'd write more but I'm about to pass out as it is so until next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright!! I love this fic! You're do humor so well. (No... NOT like that!! Gutter mind...) Anyways, you've gotten me really interested in this fic. And it won't die!! I'll help you out if I have to, but you will update this fic!! Keep up the good work chica!! I'm lovin it so far. Oh! I almost forgot... I loved Vegeta's brotherly attempts in the last chapter... so cute. Well... as cute as Vegeta can possibly be. *winks* Laterz! |
Reviewed By: Gabriel On: July 03, 2002 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic plz continue i really enjoyed it |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey kid! Glad to see you decided to post here and even happier I get to be the first reviewer. Great story everyone!-JB |
