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| "A Pressing Engagement" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: animeaddict666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY GOD I WORSHIP YOU. I was doubtful about reading a fanfic of this character, but you have redeemed my atrocious assumptions...I don't think that made sense...but it's late and hard to concentrate. Really, though, I laughed so utterly hard at your charcterization of Jack, and the dialog was superb. Mighty fine job.
| Reviewed By: Superficial Faith On: February 14, 2008 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I finally got around to reviewing this thing, however, since "Pirates of the Carribean" is not a fandom I am really knowledgeable with (even though I've seen all three of the movies), this review may not be the best I've ever written. But I'll try my best. First off, I want to compliment you on Jack's character. While there are some inconsistant portrayals, you seem to be handling him quite well (as Lady MacBeth already mentioned). What concerns me the most is some of your punctuation errors, such as "what-so-ever", which is actually all one word, if I remember correctly. You also might want to look at these chapters again as some of your questions end in periods instead of question marks. For the most part, the story seems to flow very well (some of the more complex vocabulary you use, however, does tend to throw me off a bit) and I actually had a nice time reading it. I'll definitely be keeping tabs on this one, what with you ending the chapter at a cliffhanger and all (though who am I talk; I do it all the time). I hope this review helps you out and you find it somewhat satisfactory. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Dumas1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 20:01 CST
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This is looking interesting, though I can't place the three Deaths. Anyway, I'll be waiting for the fangirls to start screaming for you to make Jack Will's 'cabin boy,' if you know what I mean.
| Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 15:45 CST
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Continued from above since it CUT OFF MY REVIEW! D: CLAPCLAP RITE MOAR! :D PLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZ! :D Ok, I'll quit now. :D Much love on Jack and discussions of death - you're managing him quite well. :D
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Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD!!! I liked the Deaths ref, but I kind of spoiled it by picturing Will's face when Jack went on about Polynesian dancing girls. XD IIIIIIIIIIIIIIII LLLLLLLLIIIIIIIIIIIKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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