| "Little White Lie" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: pewter_wings
Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I believe the Buddha would approve of Miroku's 'white lie'. ;)
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Title: Really good
Reviewed By: esmeralda21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was a really good story! i love reading all of your stories!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 11:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Adorable :) This pair is rediculously cute and you've written them well. Good luck on the drabble contest!
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 01:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Very cute. I liked the end especially.
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Reviewed By: Laura OR On: February 14, 2008 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My first thought was, THAT ASSHOLE, then I realized why he did it, and I begun to smile and laugh at the cuteness. You have always been an incredible writer in the fact that you inspire such passion and reaction from your readers, this tale proves that. Very well done!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HAHA! i dont think any1 could except Miroku to be with any women :P
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 22:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice, the title does not give away the end. You have this endless ability to amuse your readers. You are good, period.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku lies to make Sango feel better. How did he think of that, he always comes off a little clueless to me. Good job on the story and I like the premise.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww, so he lied jus to make her feel secure... how sexy of miro xDD short, and still awesome =p
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