| "A Bit of Furry Fun" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I typically hate Sess/Kag fiction. All the same, the lemon was quite hot and the premise was unique, a little fetish-y but not so focused on it that it made the story unbearable for one not into that sort of thing. Not a bad story at all.
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When sess was going down on Kagome you said he "Licked from her little hole to her click making her moan" you should have put "Clit" not click. Maybe the spell checker did that for you on accident. But other than that it looks pretty damn good. I like this story a lot! Good job.
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was so good, and it was the first one shot that ive read that i don't wish it was longer. You did a really good jod!!!
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 17:21 CDT
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"Warning: Reading this story may cause extreme arousal, sexual thoughts, sexual dreams, the need to have sex, and maybe the urge to gamble." LOL! Nice fanfic by the way. >_> I love a good smut D:
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Reviewed By: sysclp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you do a follow-up about Kagome's reaction to him marking her as his mate without asking first. Even though she enjoyed it and likes the fur, I would still expect her to be a bit upset at him not asking and take a bit of time to accept it.
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Reviewed By: NaVaJo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 20:57 CST
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i really enjoyed this...you should think about continuing it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 12:36 CST
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oh, and... more? please? ... cheesy please?
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 12:35 CST
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so.original.!!!! wow that totally blew me out!! i was like *wha?...* the whole time, well done!!
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Reviewed By: Lady_MidNight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOoo that was a good story! i liked the fact tjat he got harry it added to the story
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 12:46 CST
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this is great i really like it
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 12:41 CST
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I know this just a one-shot but I kinda want another chapter, lol. I loved it.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow !!!! i loved it.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 01:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, brace yourself for a long review lol.... I really like it, though I have to admit when you made the reference to a werewolf, it made me think of a horror story one and it was a little wierd. It was well written and if I was forced to offer any criticism, it would be maybe to change that refernce to something a little more visually appealing you know? But all in all, it's a really great fic because it shows reality in the situation. You didn't make him some perfect being like in most stories and that's how real people are. What's more is you gave him a character who could love him for his (major) flaws. I think you did a really good job though, your writing was wonderful, and while it wasn't what I was expecting, you made it worth my time. Don't let any criticisms get you down either. All brilliant writers have people who call them insane, but they only see them as insane because they have no dream world of their box. I hope you get good reviews, and continue to make out-of-the-box stories like this!
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