Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that, overall, this story was very good. There were, of course, grammar and spelling errors, and I have to admit that it was rather a bit too short, and I personally didn't appreciate parts of your writing style. But that's personal preferance. I really loved the idea behind this, though. I loved how you seem to have thought things through, how this story is so true to real life - that so many of us just want someone to love us, someone to hold, someone to whisper sweet nothings to, someone to tell us that they love us, someone to love. I think that this is a theme that runs through daily life, and truly just shows how desperate we all are for real love. Amazing story, once again, and I'll be sure to remember this one when I'm voting for the February Drabble Contest!
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