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| "Sayu's Grande Escape" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!!!I was laughing so hard I was crying. It was great, I could so see Sayu doing all that too. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Ok we all know Sayu's smart, I mean Light couldn't of been the only smart one in the family right???? I loved how she handled everything and how she got even with the Mafia guys and Mello. It's like how I'ed handle it once I figured out that they weren't the smartest of Mafia around. What I want to know is did she know how to fight back or was she making up as she was going? hehehe Can't wait for the next chapter. SMILES ^_~
| Reviewed By: Kiador StarFang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awsome, it kinda sounds like how I would've handeled the situation. And the mafia somehow reminded me of Team Rocket. Good job!
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