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| "The Study Break" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Izumi Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 23:01 CDT
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Well, this is the first good piece from the DBZ section I've read, and probably the one point I'd write about it if I ever tried. My only qualm was the ending seemed a bit rushed about from the revelation of Chichi's pregnancy onward, but considering you only had one hour to write this, it was well-paced. I also like the fact that you portrayed Chichi trying to hold back being the overprotective mother, probably a point that would have made Gohan worse off if that happened. I'd like to see you expand off of this somehow. Should be interesting to see.
| Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 18:31 CST
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What an awesome fic! By the second paragraph, I was crying. You did a great job showing ChiChi's loving, maternal side.
| Reviewed By: PerfectCell17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:07 CST
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Man, how has nobody reviewed this yet. I guess it's cause this is mm.org where nobody ever seems to review. Anyways that was such a sweet/sad fic! I absolutely loved it! Great job!
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