| "Of The Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2011 19:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, an update! I'll forgive you for the few boo-boos I spotted throughout the story since you said you posted it straight away without proofreading it. I appreciate that you wanted to get it to us so quickly! Really liked this chapter. I wasn't expecting Kagome to think it was a trick at first and not believe Inuyasha, but I love the way you handled that. It would have been too much if this whole chapter would have been her not believing him and him trying to convince her and her storming away angry and him wondering how to get her to believe him, but so just that real quick splash of anger on her part which he immediately shot down with that crimson display, that was perfect. Kind of hard to deny the truth when he went and turned all primal on her, not to mention she can feel him. Good job! By the by, to link a picture to a story, you first have to upload the art into MM's web space, which you do by being logged into your account and clicking on the "My Artwork" link/tab. In there you'll see how you can upload artwork, and all uploaded artwork appears on the "My FanFics" page in a little box right below where you type the story summary for a new story. Then you can click on whatever artwork you want to attach before clicking on Add Story. Since this story is already posted, you can click on the Edit button on the right hand side next to this story down in your list of stories, not the Chapter Manager, but the solitary Edit link that is above the Chapter Manager. That takes you back into the same My FanFics page but for that particular story, to edit say what the summary says, the rating, genre category or what have you. So you can then click on the pictures, once you've uploaded them, and add them to the story! :-) |
Reviewed By: ToryTory On: November 16, 2011 07:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the update! |
Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2011 00:09 EST
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Yay an update! thanx for continuing this even though ur busy. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see how inu and kag will handle there new intense relationship! update soon please! ^_^ |
Title: Love the story:)
Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2011 08:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My heart lurched when it just ended there, I had to double check when was the last time updated this story. Im so happy that it was this year, as many a great writer on this website suddenly stop writing:( Love the story so far, the story line is very well written. I love Inuyasha and Kagome fics:D Please update soon, as i am hooked to the story and would love to know whats gonna happen next. Can't wait for the next chapter:) xx |
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2011 09:19 EDT
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I just found this fic and I LOVE it! =) I can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: ToryTory On: September 28, 2011 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the update! I loved it! |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: September 09, 2011 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! I can't believe the intensity and emotion this story is just oozing! Can't wait for the next chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: twistedf8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2011 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahh! Cliffy!!! Oh well have to keep us on our toes... Again this story is a definite Fav of mine. I have to agree with Angel I'm a total sucker for the whole soulmate concept, but I also love your twist on Inuyasha's origins... Waiting somewhat patiently (lol) for the next update...Wish it could be sooner lol |
Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2011 00:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I love the idea of the fic. I was expecting Inuyasha to be a demon to sort of relate back to the canon, but was pleasantly surprised that he wasn't. I can't wait to see where things go next. Also, if you are still looking, I would be OK with becoming a beta for your fics. |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2011 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boo-boos not withstanding, I LOVED this update! Kagome seems like a smart girl, able to put two and two together fairly quickly and already not brush off what was presumably just a 'story' to start connecting the dots where Inuyasha was concerned. If those hairs standing up on her arms were any indication, then she already knew what he was about to say. Still, though, you just had to end it right there, didn't you? *smack* BUT you did keep your promise of the new update being on time, so I guess I'll let that cliffy go as well. Fabulous update! And I like your whole take on it, of the Fallen being sort of middle-ground, a lesser punishment for turning against heaven without getting cast down into hell, sort of like they're on probation so they can earn their wings back...at least figuratively. Not sure how Inuyasha would look with wings. Hmmm... But I love what you did with Kagome being a soul-mate. For a second there I thought it was going to be revealed that she was also a Fallen and just didn't know it, but so okay no, just a handpicked human soul-mate instead. That's good enough! Really looking forward to seeing her reaction to the news! |
Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2011 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am such a sucker for soul-mate stories. But my GOSH, I love this one so far! Please update again soon! I can't wait for Kagome's reaction!! Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2011 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I'll say this over and over and I know I have already, but I am so loving this story! Please and I quote, "PLEASE" update soon! |
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2011 00:52 EDT
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Love this story! |
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2011 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I loved this chapter. I was laughing at the 'peep' show! |
Reviewed By: ToryV On: August 26, 2011 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love love love this story so far! |
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