| "Of The Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty-Too late to sign in On: August 25, 2011 09:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Re reading as I forgot where I was last on in the story. it is now 11:30ish and I should have been in bed about an hour ago or at least trying to get into bed... But no I had to finish re reading... this story is just that good that I don't mind feeling like crap tomorrow when I work on my team project for uni. |
Reviewed By: Sziraface [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2011 17:16 EDT
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Essence of awesomesauce so far. I'm a fan of the story u got going hoping for quick updates D: You should change the status of your story to in progress not completed though :x |
Reviewed By: The Reader On: August 10, 2011 10:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An update from you is a most welcome sight on any day. An update this awesome, is even better!! Now, after abandoning your loyal readers to their luck, leaving them thinking that you were M.I.A. and we had no hope to see you back, I must shake my finger and say: "You naughty, naughty girl! Shame on you young lady for leaving us like that!" Now that that little bit is out of the way, allow me to volunteer for the arm hacking if you abandon us again! So let's try to keep you in one piece, and update again soon? |
Reviewed By: CrimsonLila On: August 10, 2011 01:20 EDT
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Sooo happy to finally have another chapter come out. I enjoy every single one. Still love it and wondering where you're going to go with the rest of the story and can't wait to find out (although i have no choice in that regard, dang lol). Keep 'em comin. |
Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2011 22:52 EDT
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I love seeing Inuyasha actually show respect but still be his usual "I'mma do my own thing" self. Poor Kagome though! I have a feeling you have a whole lot of changes planned for the girl. Can't wait for your next update! |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2011 22:22 EDT
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I actually thought that I was hallucinating when I saw that you had a new chapter up. Lol. Thank you so much for updating. ^^ |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2011 14:56 EDT
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I was so excited when I saw the new chapter! XD So awesome! I wondr how Kagome will take the news?? |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2011 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another update! Yes there were a few typos and other boo-boos, but I'll shoot those over as an e-mail so as not to waste time here. THIS box is meant to tell you only how much I love this story! I can't wait to see how Kagome takes it all in. Of course, if she has trouble believing them at first and thinking they must be deranged and making it all up, all Inuyasha has to do is lower that wall he'd put around his emotions to let her feel the link. It'll be kind of hard to ignore that, especially if they can actually straight up communicate with words telepathically. Then she'll have no choice but to believe him. How is the rest of her family doing? It was at night so presumably they all just went to sleep, and now waking up the next morning they just see Sango's note and think it's Kagome's and that she's at the library so no harm done? What about them falling asleep wherever they'd happened to be? Were they actually already in bed, perhaps? Does Sango's hand writing look enough like Kagome's? Maybe I'm reading too much into it, LOL. Well I'll worry about her family later, I want to see Kagome's reaction to what really happened and what is happening in the world around her! Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: joyajsdhfkajsdhlf On: May 15, 2011 17:52 EDT
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OMFG, I JUST FOUND THIS STORY AND I'M IN LOVE WITH IT...idk if you forgot about updating but...? hehe. it's way passed your month now! lol. jk, but seriously, i can't wait for more! update ASAP!(: thanks! |
Reviewed By: kamiko blalark On: April 01, 2011 09:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i do not review stories unless i find them worth my time. that should explain just how much i LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Midnight Cat On: March 27, 2011 08:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I just discovered this story and I have to say that I am just floored!! It is an amazing tale and I have loved each and every chapter!! I specially loved the last one, as in most stories when Sesshomaru decides to pull rank on Inuyasha, poor Inu always ends up bloody, beaten or in a huge physical fight. The fact that you gave our most beloved character, a set of "Cojones" was just BEAUTIFUL!! The way he responded was amazing and I was hooting all over the room! HELL YEAH!! +++***+++ PLEASE, Oh PLEASE don't leave this story without finishing it!! There are very few good writers around with good stories and it just breaks my heart when a good story is left abandoned!! This is one of those stories that I want to follow to the very end, so please don't stop writing!! *+*+*+ *+*+* Also, I read back in one of your notes that you need a beta, and I would love to help you out!! If you wish to contact me, you can do it directly at midcat2001...(at)...yahoo...(dot)...com +*+*+* +*+*+* Also, please, pretty please!! Update soon!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter and I am already biting my nails to find out what happens next!! +*+*+ +*+*+ THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING AND SHARING!! Hugs: MidCat |
Reviewed By: kazanova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2011 06:00 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is amazing so far, and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more! |
Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2011 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled upon your story by chance, and then read every chapter in one sitting. Suffice it to say, I love the story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: frannnnnnn On: March 16, 2011 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY FAVORITE STORY. i'm always constantly going back and rereading the chapters when i've gone through withdrawals! haha. BUT I LITERALLY LOVE THIS STORY AND YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER(: can't wait until the update!(: |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2011 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squeal and write more |
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