| "Crossed Paths" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Fierce Deity On: December 13, 2002 16:55 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm reading it. I just don't usually comment until the end of a fic or unless I find an error or something so brilliant I can't help but comment. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: December 13, 2002 18:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love it! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: sky On: November 14, 2002 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that this story is really orginal with alot of imagination i can't wait to read the next chapter_sky |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 19:01 EST
Comment/Review:
great was your story... it inspired me in many ways and I am glad that I have read it. |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: November 02, 2002 17:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I never thought yamcha could hold out that long! lol (i really think he is very stupid and he needs a cow shoved up his ass! lol) Anyway i cant help but wonder what else kami knows about what is going to happen! =)(around the lines of vegeta and bulma! *giggle* vegeta is soooo sexy lol) *evil smirk* anyway great chappie and and i hope to see more! please update soon! and people please review! well g2g bye! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 00:26 EST
Comment/Review:
Nice to see you still are adept at alternate universes.
Anyway, as much as I enjoy this fanfic, and I'm enjoying it immensly, when will you get up to par with A Light in the Darkness? |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: October 29, 2002 16:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! ireally like this fic! i wonder if piccolo's attack worked or not? I also cant help but wonder how vegeta an bulma will meet i think i have a pretty good idea how they will but i just want to know how you make it happen! But anyway i cant wait til you update do please update soon ok i cant wait til the next chapter! and make it as long as the other chapters lol =) ok bye people please review! =) |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 08:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok now things are startin to get good
it is really becoming a good fic
i can't wait to read more
mmmmmm more fic (lol) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 06:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I'll let you have the tail thing because you're right, they do need some kind of edge to get out of this. Just don't forget that Vegeta doesn't have that weakness. Lots of fanfic authors do forget it and turn his tail into weapon for Bulma or some kind of super G-spot. It can't possibly be that sensitive if grabbing it in battle does nothing to him.
Anyway, enough of my pet peeve. This is an interesting new way to look at DBZ and I can't wait to see more! :) |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know darn well I adore this baby! ^_^; (I hope this thing has me signed under the RIGHT name this time, but just in case, it's Sel, Mia! *waves*) Thanks for the thank you, btw! *hugs* ANd I love it, love it, love it! |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woohoo i love it so original
it was a bit slow at first but i can see that it is going great places (i'm psychic, lol)
so pleases keep on writing
i can'r wait till vegeta arrives
(he rocks sooooo much) |
Reviewed By: skijg On: October 21, 2002 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I really liked this fic, and hope that you update it often. Your style of writing is good, it's clear and easy to follow. The spelling and grammar was excellent, with no mistakes that I could see. As for originality, so far I haven't read any other fics that have just Nappa showing up first (there may be some out there, but I haven't seen them). Usually with this sort of AU it's Vegeta, or all three of them, so in my mind it's very original. I hope it stays as original once we get a little further into the fic, especcially once the B/V romance starts showing up. There're so many cliches with that couple. It's a pretty fun fic so far, but there isn't much action, which is why I gave it an 8. Once we get into the battle in the next chapter this will probably go up. My overall rating is a ten, because it's a highly enjoyable, well-written start to a story that I hope will be as popular and enjoyable as your other fics. Keep up the great writing! |
Reviewed By: Daniela On: October 21, 2002 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ehm... maybe I got a little carried away with the rating, but I couldn't help it!! I'm really looking forward to the next chapters. The story is well written and original, of all the twists I've seen till now they never reversed the roles between Raditz and Nappa, and I'm curious. Moreover the promise of a romance (between my favourite couple) growing little by little in an adventure story is really interesting. Please continue!! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: December 13, 2002 06:18 EST
Comment/Review:
I like this fic. it is very good and interessting, but i only hope you bring goku back in time and let him be the strongest so we it should be. I don't mind that Raditz is alive and Bluma and Vegeta get together and you are right earth warriors are strong at this time of the show. i would love to see a little bit brotherly and family bonding and the shocking faces from raditz and vegeta, when goku goes super saiyajin for the first time.
or is goku not coming back in this fic and you get raditz and chichi together? hm, but way are possible and i would read it anyway. But Dragonball (z) without Goku is for me not anymore
Dragonball.
Please update soon. |
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