| "Crossed Paths" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Oozaru Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! This fic is great! But it seems as if you've abandoned this fic.... WAAAAHHH!!!! Updaaaaaaaate!!!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 04:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this and I agree with Bowshere. It's a shame to let a good story likr this go to waste. I know you have plans for another chapter and I'm gonna keep my fingers crossed. 1 year between chapter 5 and 6. R/Y - hmm. Should be an interesting Yaoi. Please read this and realize ther are still people out there who scan the older fics looking for the gems. You have a diamond in the rough here. Cut it, clean it, and finish it off.
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Title: Crossed Paths
Reviewed By: bowsher On: April 08, 2004 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was a very good AU, ove of the best that ive read so far actually. i hope you continue with the story, it would be a shame to let a good story like this go to waste.
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Reviewed By: PeuTiFuL JaNe On: December 10, 2003 23:39 EST
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hey man this fanfic is awesome... man i like the way how u make everything fit in and make sense!!! YEAH WELL KEEP UPDATING :) luv jane!!
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Title: *kewl*
Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoUsLy_jEsSy On: October 04, 2003 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes i really like this fan fic (mainly because finally nappa dies instead of raddizt..hehe)oh and i like that it all falls into plot!!!yah I hope that you continue finishing this fan fic bcause it's really good...hehe
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Reviewed By: Digifan On: August 20, 2003 12:41 EDT
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Great story, it took me awhil to read but it was worth it. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Maria S. On: January 11, 2003 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice try But I think I found out who the surpising couple are it's Radditz & Yamcha isn't , you dont have to say yes, just say I'm getting warmer or colder. |
Reviewed By: Maria S. On: January 11, 2003 16:15 EST
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I think there should be a little Romance between Radditz and Bulma first and lean it towrds B/V. |
Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know I love this fic! I especially like how you've tweaked the personalities of Vegeta and Radditz without stripping them of their Saiyan traits. Most fics that try to make them sound not so barberic wind up making them sound incredibly OOC, but you guys managed to keep every word out of their mouths sounding on track. The only thing that got me at first was the thought of the two of them sitting in Bulma's kitchen in full Saiyan armor, leaving me a little O_o but now I see why you did it.
Also, I absolutly love the fact that Gohan gets to meet a more civilizied uncle instead of the little snippet they had together in the anime that had almost no real interaction. Radditz was probably one of the most underused characters that actually could have been something (Nobody likes Nappa anyway) and I'm glad you decided to give him a significant role in this fic. I haven't read too many fics featuring him. Maybe I should ^_^
Above all, I think the different writing styles between you guys work extreemely well together. Normally I wouldn't notice things like that, but I have a new appreciation for RPG'ing out a fic now, and the roles that you all have taken are executed to a T. (and BTW: Thanks for keeping Gohan sounding like a kid, as so many write him well above his years! ^_^)
Please update soon!!! I can't wait to see what you do with the whole Namek adventure! HURRRRRY!! *points to self* No patience here, you know that LOL ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Kichi On: December 31, 2002 23:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the way you had Krillin still crushing on Bulma. and I loved the fight between Bulma and Vegeta. when you had bulma say that woman run from him screaming or die laughing, i laughed my @ss off. |
Reviewed By: Daniel of Lorien On: December 31, 2002 15:12 EST
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everything your doing is perfect. The pace fits ... not to fast not to slow. I haven't seen any romance, so I can't really say how yourr doing on that except that Vegeta's reaction is probably about right. The only thing I don't want to see is a dumb Goku. He isn't stupid, naive but not stupid. |
Reviewed By: Daniel of Lorien On: December 28, 2002 00:31 EST
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Keep up the writing... people are reading it and I'll always R/R |
Reviewed By: Ryukai On: December 23, 2002 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeeze, never reviewed on MediMiner before. Bear with me plz. Anyway I'm reviewing Crossed Paths, I think it's really well-written, you have excellent spelling and grammar, it's fun to read, you're a descriptive writer and you show not tell. Obviously I like the story and think you are a great writer. I wouldn't worry too much about the review thing, it's just a lot of people are lazy and think that someone else will review, hell I'm one of them. Please keep updating!! PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Jorge On: December 21, 2002 00:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! But please write a little faster. It's so interesting that I wanna read more. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: ThE_wEiRd_KiD_nExT_DoOr On: December 17, 2002 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Har har. :P AHH.. BRING GOKU BACK SOOOOONNNNN!!!!.. BULMA MUST NOT DIE!!! >>comments: If you're going to use the Japanese type-ish names for Krillin and Tien and others (if you have), then you might as well use them for all the others. Like.. Bulma>Buruma ... Yamcha>Yamucha ... Radditz>Raddizu or something like that.. :p overall, very nice.. hehe ^^ |
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