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"I'll Have Lemonade, Please" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ]
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 Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 26, 2008 21:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know why I didn't find this story earlier but I am so thanking every higher power I know for me finding this story today. Funny, witty, dramatic, romantic; pure perfection is the only thing that can possible start to sum up your story. I love how you reference Okaami-chan's "Turnabout is Fair Play," in the line, "Think of it like those chimps they put in front of a keyboard. Sheer trial and error will lead one to write 'Turnabout is Fair Play' sooner or later." That one made me laugh. Well almost all of it made me laugh, or cry or just feel happy. Thank you for writing this amazing story and I shall now begin the sequel. I can hardly wait. Your Fan and Friend, Zach P.S. Do you know if Okaami-chan ever finished "Turnabout is Fair Play." It just stops and she says she will finish it on her account but no updates come. And my pitful mind's imaginings can not possibly compare to the awesomeness her actual writings would be. It makes me sad. Well, I'll talk to you later and take care. Zach
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2008 05:46 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice story... enjoy reading it... until next time...
 Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2007 10:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
That story was great. very funny
 Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 30, 2006 18:09 CST
Comment/Review:
aw thast so cute! i really like it!
 Title: EDIT
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2005 01:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oops...kindly disregard that last bit about Lemonade, Too. Didn't realize it was already up.
 Title: Long Time, No read
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2005 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, whats up? Excellant job. I know you completed this a long time ago because its been several years since I've read this. I never had the oppurtunity to review until now. For an AU fic, this is pretty incredible. I can tell you went through great lengths to keep the Inuyasha group in character, and it helps a lot! The evolution of the characters, in particular kagome and Inuyasha was well-paced, and the supoorting cast I found very likable and believable. This was one of the first lemon fics I've read and therefore, it holds a certain place in my mind. Thank God that you've written this out so well. I actually have to put you on par with another great author, Sueric. Throughout the story, I found no major spelling/grammar errors, and that really impressed me. The whole idea of Yash being a detective and having Kagome as a cop was pretty interesting and original...normally, I'd disregard an idea, thinking it would be too hard to pull off. Here, you've done an excellant job of keeping everyone believable. Overall, this is honestly among the best fics that I've read. Keep it up, I sure hope you're still writing. Oh, and a quick question from a fan: Do you plan on uploading the sequel? Lemonade, Too? Lol, awesome job, keep kicking ass. d('')b
 Reviewed By: bKatty  On: January 15, 2005 13:58 CST
Comment/Review:
this is the greatest AU Inuyasha story ever! (i read it twice ^_^) **crosses fingers** i hope theres a sequel!
 Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2004 14:17 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome.. that was just to good..
 Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 06, 2004 22:03 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was a great story!!!
 Reviewed By: Inu Girl  On: January 01, 2004 02:22 CST
Comment/Review:
hey what just one momint what a bout the baby and Songo and Moroku did they have kids detals people detals
 Reviewed By: Relix  On: November 18, 2003 13:58 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WHOOO!!!! THAT WAS PRETTY F*****G AWESOME! Seriously, this is so awesome.. i hope the sequel will be finished soon!
 Reviewed By: Laydhwk  On: July 16, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very, very well done! Enjoyed immensely. Such emotion, and detail. Please, continue to keep writing!
 Reviewed By: Bunny  On: July 05, 2003 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Weird, yet likable. The whole future yet past setting works. And my favorite pairing is Naraku/Kikyou. They're so perfect for each other, don't you think?(HeHe) Any who, liked it and I especially liked the title.(very funny) The only turn off(pun intended) was the "doggie style" mating. I know Inu Yasha is a dog demon but, give me a break! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Precious  On: June 26, 2003 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:

WOW! This is by far one of the best fan fics I have ever read, and it's an AU to boot! I was so blown away. I love the relationship you gave Kagome and Inu Yasha. I also like the way Sango and Inu Yasha kept insulting each other. All the terminology was creative, and I love the fact that the characters explained them too. I haven't been this excited about a story since I read Chris-san's Beauty & The Beast Inu Yasha style. And I am soooo ready to read the rest of the sequel: Lemonade, Too.
 Reviewed By: Prae  On: June 12, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heh, I like your work.
You're good at writing attitude, Inuyasha-style.
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