| "I'll Have Lemonade, Please" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh wow! this is very good. i like how you're writing this. i hope you update really soon. my one but of advice to you is unless you plan to do something later in the story that require inuyasha and kagome being hard set together, make the finalizing of their relationship (moving in, her coming to terms witht he pregnancy, etc) take a while. if you resolve the conflict between inu and kag before you resolve the main conflict of solving the murder it may not be as good as it could be. that fact that you've got two whole (very interesting) plots going on is excellent. i'll be checking daily for updates so please don't disappoint me by making me wait too long! ^_^
Mara |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 18:29 CST
Comment/Review:
lmao! krista allouva!!! what a name..or maybe it's just me who thinks it's funny!!! |
Reviewed By: Syethemano On: December 13, 2002 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the greatest Inu/Kag fics I've ever read! Honestly! An it's an AU! Ohhh, I hope Kagome doesn't get too angry with Inu Yasha though. |
Reviewed By: Vixen On: December 13, 2002 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cool and very original. I read your other 3 chapters on iridescent dreams and encourage you to put more up soon! I'm addicted :). |
Reviewed By: Cataluna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More more more!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: spazmo On: January 03, 2003 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really one of the best IY fics I've read. I am excited about the sequel.
My one beef is that the Naraku and Kikyo involvement was explored rather minimally, though the BDSM angle was inspired. Can I hope that Sesshoumaru will appear in the sequel? I love that guy. Thanks for writing an AU story that includes gritty details and isn't just a high-school romance fic! |
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