| "I'll Have Lemonade, Please" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rin On: January 22, 2003 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolutely excellent read! It was very intelligent in every aspect; from the writing style to the lemony goodness! ^_^ These are the kind of fanfics I love to read! I'm looking forward to some more great work from you! |
Reviewed By: Lo On: January 22, 2003 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic, your writing talent astounds me! Great plot and very detailed, if only all fanfics were this good. Nice work. |
Reviewed By: Christina On: January 20, 2003 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're plot is very interesting and it seems you put a lot of work to get this story as it is. This is one of the very few stories I enjoyed to the fullest and I commend you on your efforts. There were no confusion when I read this, as there is in many stories out there. Though the story is exceptional, I would like to add that it might make more sence if you made it clearer how demons are still living in the modern time. That's the only thing I think that could be changed, but the story is still amazing without that detail. Please keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: crystal luver On: January 19, 2003 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked |
Reviewed By: Diane On: January 18, 2003 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this fic. I just decided to try Inu-Yasha fics today & this is 1 of the first I've read but I liked it the best of the ones I did read, I read all 6 chapters in almost 1 sitting & can hardly wait for the sequel. More soon please. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 22:49 CST
Comment/Review:
waaah i want a sequel!!! when will you post the first chapter?!
Mara |
Reviewed By: Black Angel--AD On: January 13, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This fic is freaking perfect!! Please write the sequel soon!! It is going to kick ass!! Love the fic! |
Reviewed By: Hoyin On: January 13, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH~ this was a lovely fic!!! write more fics like this! |
Reviewed By: hershey On: January 07, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the BEST fanfic i have ever read!! U definitely HAVE to do a sequel! Nicely described, and original, and GOOD, GOOD, and did i mention GOOD!! |
Reviewed By: Chiaki Nozomi On: December 27, 2002 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, wow, wow! I really enjoyed this fanfic; it's the best alt. uni. I've come across so far! I adored the universe you made and Inuyasha's character, so please please, add more! I'll definately read the sequel! |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*from the title* what the hell is up with Yash and the hoe in the motel and it better be Kikyo cuz that would suite her. And she better not come between Yash and Kagome. And also if Inuyasha says Kagome is his mate WHY is he letting that bitchfuck him. Gods, I'm going insame I love this fic soooooo much!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Icefyre On: December 15, 2002 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really inspiring story that made me see the characters in a new way! I especially liked the shower scene! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is getting better and better. But hey whats up with chapters 5 and 6 cuz their not working!!!! Please make them work soon, i can't get enough.
~luv ya~
P.S. i sequel would be the best! |
Reviewed By: Aki-chan On: December 15, 2002 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Very well-plotted and engrossing. But the thing with Kikyo was very confusing - you didn't really explore the possibilities enough. Oh, well, write the sequel soon! Maybe there you can explain about everyone's favorite miko. Or, my favorite miko, anyhow... |
Reviewed By: Aki-chan On: December 15, 2002 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Very well-plotted and engrossing. But the thing with Kikyo was very confusing - you didn't really explore the possibilities enough. Oh, well, write the sequel soon! Maybe there you can explain about everyone's favorite miko. Or, my favorite miko, anyhow... |
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