| "Baba's Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm lovin this one too. ^^ I've read it before, but I guess something distracted me because I almost ALWAYS leave reviews for everything I finish reading, especially if it's something this good. Sorry bout that. Anyways, this WAS extremely well written. Very interesting plot about her not wanting to go all the way with Goten. And the entire Baba thing. You never get to see her in fanfiction. So kudos on originality! I wouldn't mind reading a continuation! ~_^ But it's fine like it is. Very romantic and emotional. Great work! |
Reviewed By: Mirai Marron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maaan, no wonder you never showed me the rest of this fic. Another one with Yamucha. e_e Oh well. It was written good. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 17:28 CST
Comment/Review:
That was so sweet and totally romantic. Once again, you've shown your hopeless romantic side and made a really great story from it, no matter how far fetched. Don't you just wish things like that happened in real life? *sigh* Well, great story just the same. I do wish you'd make another chapter. Show everyone's reaction to Marron and Yamcha's love. You have yet to show that in one of your stories, though it seems you will eventually in Three Days In May. Anyway, awesome job and all that jazz. I can't wait for more from you. Adios. Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: xshiny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. as you can tell i really enjoyed this! it was actually my first y and m fic! but i loved it alot! aww. it was so sweet. good job! i hope to see a sequel in the near future ^.^ lol. |
