| "A Sorta Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: IT ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I loved the ending of that story. This my second time reading it and I love it. I have to agree with my sis inu/oc is a good pairing as long as Kagome is not this major idiot or jerk. Anyway I love your style of writing and the way you left the reader with questions I think that shows that you have good skill and a good understanding and passion for what you're writing, because if you're going to do something at least enjoy it don't let it be something you HAVE to do let it be something that you LOVE to do it makes life so much easier. Anyway I basically love your story it was very creative and I hope to find your other stories just as good as this one, so I'll see you next review. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now Yumi: yay it's finished. Lady Vaoh: Oh yeah that rocked it rocked it ruled it rocked. Yumi: *sighs* not the it rocks song again. Lady Vaoh: I have to just to annoy and to show that I loved the story. Yumi: I think she got it *points back at the dozen or so banners that say (A Sorta Fairytale Rocked)* Lady Vaoh: dude you can hardly ever say enough of a good thing. *trails off singing it rocks* Yumi: *sighs* she'll never shutup (just in case you thought the first part was too serious)
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Title: Great Ending
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay yeah your ending was kinda sad and depressing but it was really good and unexpected. It was totally dif from the norm and i like that. You should try and write an oc/inu pair with a happing ending. I like that you leave things for me to think about at the end of a story though it is frustrating. Keep up the great job. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Title: Who says it needs one?
Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, an orginal story and writer! (I thought you had gone the way of the dodo.) I don't care about the yaoi, this is well thought out and really engaging. I like Inu, I like Kagome, but I am drooling in love with Matt. He's human!! Not super powered or selected by god to bear some horrible curse, he's just HUMAN!! Thank you for a breath of fresh air in a stale line of fics. Kudos.
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Title: Great Story!!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
This really is a great little story. I really liked it alot and its a very original idea never read an inu/oc before though ive looked for them maybe you can recommened some to me. Oh and i just love Matt hes funny and cute. S16: you had one more chapter to go and you just left me hanging. Kurama: I'm sure she will get to the chap soon. S16: But ku-chan i want to read it now. Kur: you must learn patience san-chan. S16: *pouts* sure ku-chan i can wait a whole 2 min for the new chap. Kur: san-chan *warningly*. S16: okay okay ill wait. Please update soon. (can you tell voah is my sis?) Buh-Bye ^__^
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Title: THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this story it's so sweet and Matt is great the best oc. The whole Kagome part was so emotional and it rocked. Oh yeah, this story rocks, it rocks. Yumi: do you have to do this everytime you find a good story. Lady Vaoh: of course that's the fun of finding a great story. Yumi: I thought the point of finding a good story was reading it. Lady Vaoh: of course it is but it wouldn't be a good story if you didn't sing it rocks in the reviews. Yumi: why do I even bother trying to understand you. Lady Vaoh: I don't know. Anyway your a great writer so update soon I must read more. Sincerely your new reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: taren On: January 11, 2004 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaluver29 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a great story!! And very romantic too, can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr On: August 30, 2003 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, I wish you the best of luck with this story. I am in the middle of writing my first fanfic ever on fanfiction.net. It is with Inuyasha and it's very funny if I do say so my self. It is called Fliped and Spun, and my name on the website is rAiNwAtEr. You should take a look and review. Well anyway onegai update soon arigatou. =p have fun writing. |
Reviewed By: Stranger On: January 04, 2003 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea and it's realy good so far. I hope you continue it soon. I'll be waiting! |
Reviewed By: Youko_Kei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god he's a Christian! AAACK! *hides* Evil bad! Eek.
Seriously though, this sounds really cute. ^-^ Poor Inu-san though. *steals him off to comfort him* Can't wait to read the rest! |
