| "Captivation" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Perry D. On: February 25, 2003 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is soooooo cute! This chapter had a lot of stuff going on and was real good. I'll be sad to see Wufei go. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: February 25, 2003 08:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Wahhhh! Wufei's gone! My life is over! ANYWAY, at least he's with Sally. I was hoping you end them up together some way. Duo and Hilde are as cute as ever. Poor Relena all alone. =( |
Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: February 22, 2003 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
ENJOYABLE CHAPTER. I JUST DON'T KNOW HOW IN THE HECK SALLY COULD PASS FOR A MAN! WILL THERE BE A ROMANCE WITH HER AND WUFEI? |
Reviewed By: Seth On: February 22, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sally pretending to be a man and getting away with it. Cool. Why does she want Relena to talk to Wufei? What are you doing to Wufei? |
Reviewed By: brian On: February 22, 2003 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice update, but kind of dull with just Quatre and Relena going on about love and stuff. Still an good story, but I'm more interested in the Relena/Heero elements. The Dr."Barry" converstion was much more involving. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 22, 2003 12:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Good fic with a very engaging storyline. And most of all, Relena's not annoyingly clingy like most fics portray her. Hey, I like the girl and I hate reading stuff that has her as a pain in the ass. This doesn't. |
Reviewed By: LisaAndrew On: February 22, 2003 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I haven't reviewed in a while. Just plain lazy. I give this all 10's for super cuteness and the Quatre appeal. He's just so CUTE! |
Reviewed By: Cleao On: February 21, 2003 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be short and sweet. I likey. Gee, I WONDER who Quatre loves? Yeah, right. That's about it. -_~ |
Reviewed By: no pen name On: February 21, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem to be a big fan of H/R like the rest of us, but how about a request? How about writing seperate romances for the rest of the characters? Like Trowa and Une! Sorry, I'm obsessed with that pairing. |
Reviewed By: Carrie "AngelBaby" M. On: February 21, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Missing Heero and Relena interaction! It was funny how scared Quatre was Relena was in love with him. I'm a militant pro-Heero/Relena fan, but I could go for an alternative pairing of Quatre and Relena. That would be different. |
Reviewed By: Perry D. On: February 20, 2003 22:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Relena's the little miracle worker, isn't she? HA! And I thought the part with her and Quatre was good. Just can't see him with Dorothy sometimes. Hurts my head to think about it. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: February 20, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quatre in love with Dorothy? Awwww. Sweet! Nice to have a loving moment before the s*** hits the fan between Heero and Relena. |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: February 20, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dorsble scene with Quatre and Relean when he thought she loved him. Q's in love with Dorothy, right? Scary...but sweet! |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: February 20, 2003 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, this is a long, involved story, but an excellant read. Now that I'm invested in these characters, I hope for a sappy, happy ending. |
Reviewed By: Seth On: February 16, 2003 10:14 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm agreeing with everyone. Why the heck did Relena let Une come stay with her? Sure, she's sane now, but will that last? Heero thinks she's guilty, so he's going to blow his gasket. |
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