| "Captivation" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pammy On: April 05, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter and the part with Rashia and Cathy was sweet. So was Hilde over crazy Duo. BUT ENOUGH ABOUT THEM, WHAT ABOUT RELENA? |
Reviewed By: Yen On: April 01, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cathy and Rashid....aw! Very nice. I furs going to fly when Heero comes home. I hope he's not to brutal with her. |
Reviewed By: Abby On: March 24, 2003 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you write this, in keeping with the time period and its customs. Please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Cleao On: March 21, 2003 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, Dorothy wants to be dominated, huh? ^^
I always figured her for the whip cracker not crackee. And what was that little moment with Trowa about Une? Is there something up there? |
Reviewed By: Yen On: March 21, 2003 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That moment with Quatre and Dorothy was so funny and sweet. Dorothy has the hots for Quatre and it freaks her out. Love it! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Abby On: March 20, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease write more!! You are very intriguing with the way you don't change the characters too much,but surprise us with interesting turns at every chance you have! |
Reviewed By: Abby On: March 20, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease write more!! You are very intriguing with the way you don't change the characters too much,but surprise us with interesting turns at every chance you have! |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: February 28, 2003 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINISH IT! Need a happy conclusion. Joking, love all your chapters and will continue reading until you say your done. |
Reviewed By: brian On: February 27, 2003 22:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't believe I like a historical romance! It's all your fault. Still gonna keep reading though. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Seth On: February 26, 2003 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm, Sally and Wufei didn't last long this time around. Aw, I'm more into Heero and Relena and Duo and Hilde anyway. |
Reviewed By: Carrie "AngelBaby" M. On: February 26, 2003 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, to lazy to write much. When is Heero coming back? I ready for the fireworks with him and Relena. |
Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: February 26, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT YOU'RE GETTING RID OF WUFEI? I WAS KIND OF WANTING SALLY AND HIM TO BECOME A COUPLE. DARNIT. EVERYTHING ELSE A REAL TIGHT. ^O^ |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 26, 2003 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm short on words so I'll just say very nice emotion in chapter 8. |
Reviewed By: no pen name On: February 25, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good, good good. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Cleao On: February 25, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo and Hilde are perfect. Bring back Hilde's scary father! He's a riot. Feeling bad for Relena. Everyone's leaving her and when Heero gets back...uh, oh. |
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