| "Captivation" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Brian On: January 24, 2003 22:43 CST
Comment/Review:
*gasping for breathe* need next chapter to survive... |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 23, 2003 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUN, DUN, DUN! Une owns the mill? Interesting. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 23, 2003 09:13 CST
Comment/Review:
DUN, DUN, DUN! Une owns the mill? Interesting. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: January 20, 2003 14:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes, happy the next chappie is up so soon. Poor Relena. Too bad about the nasty gossiping people. Oh, well. Heero can kiss it and make it all better... |
Reviewed By: Seth On: January 19, 2003 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad Duo has Relena to help him conspire to get Hilde. And now Heero's courting Relena...awwww. |
Reviewed By: Chun Li On: January 19, 2003 08:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Eager for the next chapter! Heck, I just read the first one and want more already. =p |
Reviewed By: Perry D. On: January 19, 2003 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm bored and can't get to sleep...not bad reading. Makes me look forward to upcoming chapter. |
Reviewed By: Perry D. On: January 19, 2003 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm bored and can't get to sleep...not bad reading. Mkes me look forward to upcoming chapter. |
Reviewed By: No pen name On: January 19, 2003 00:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Hilde's daddy is scary. Ha! Serves Duo right. The chemistry between Duo x Hilde is adorable. |
Reviewed By: Jason On: January 18, 2003 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Make Duo work for it Hilde! I liked the intro of Hilde's dad. He was pretty funny. |
Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: January 18, 2003 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, TALK ABOUT FATE. I'D JUST FINISHED READONG SEDUCTION AND NOW THE SEQUEL IS OUT. YEAH! |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 18, 2003 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wish I could give you a higher rating than 10. I adore DuoxHilde and HeeroxRelena romantic fics and I glad your sequels out. |
Reviewed By: Cleao On: January 18, 2003 08:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo chasing Hilde! She doesn't stand a chance. I wish he was chasing me! =D |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: January 18, 2003 08:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant! A sequel we all want and love. Great chapter. I enjoy the writing and characterization.
Wufei, as a preist was enough of a shock. Just the idea of these particular charcters in their set social classes and interactions is good writing. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: January 18, 2003 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, a sequel. Hope Hilde give Duo nothing but trouble. Of course, he has to win her in the end. They are such a cute couple besides Relena and Heero. |
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