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| "Love Hina/DBZ" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Foamy On: January 02, 2004 13:28 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty good. they should be Sayians tho. they could do all the weird transformations and stuff. with the glowing hair, and green eyes, and the blasting stuff, you know what i'm talking about. Your Lord and Master, Foamy.
| Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alrighty then...
How In the world could you not make them Sayians!?
I mean, couldn't you have done something like make Vegeta, Goku, Gohan, Trunks, and Goten crash land on earth when they were babies and...well...blah, blah, blah....use that imagineation!!
::takes beep breath::
Ok, now that I got that out of my system....
Good job on writing the first few chapters, keep it up!
-kinoko
P.S. You only got a 9 cause you stripped Prince Vegeta of his race. (I'm a die hard Vegeta fan.) |
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