| "Footsteps in the Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: nhamot [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
oookkkkaaaayyyy? let see if i have this straight. the first girl was always hearing somthing behind her and there was this other girl who thought there was somone following her... so the two of them were following each other and then the second girl kills the first girl but fails to stop the noise that's folling her so she kills herself to get away from the noise.
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Reviewed By: Cliodhna Glen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY nice - this is exactly what scary stories are supposed to be about. The end was left hanging a tad, but in some ways maybe that's a good thing - it leaves things up to the audience's imagination. The effects with the shoes were wonderful in helping to set the pace and mood for the story. Wonderful work.
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