| "Unbreak My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Title: Oops...
Reviewed By: Caphriel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 15:49 EDT
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And, now I've finished chapter 11, and have discovered that someone else already pointed that translation error out to you. Sorry about that U^_^ But, that doesn't explain why you didn't fix it... Anyway, nice job. It could use a rewrite for spelling and grammer (mostly spelling), but it's a really good story. Of course, I haven't read the epilogue yet...
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Reviewed By: Caphriel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to point out an error. Inuyasha no Fukai (from chapter 10), does not mean Inuyasha's Forest. Fuaki is "deep; profound; thick; close". I presume you were trying to take the word for forest from the title of Fukai Mori (Deep Forest). Fukai is deep, mori is forest. So "the forest of Inuyasha" should be Inuyasha no mori.
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Reviewed By: moonstruck On: May 24, 2004 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyed this fic, thank you! Loved the way you told the story and liked your flashbacks. Many authors try the flashback thing and only succed in confusing the readers. You did it gracefully. Also, where did Kagome and Inuyasha go when they disappeared? Is this a stupied question? I think I'll go back and reread. Thanks for the hours of entertainment!
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Reviewed By: Yukiidoe On: April 08, 2004 19:44 EDT
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The Anime is really bad, don't watch it, it sways to much from the Manga, I would know, I've read up to book 36...
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Title: READ IT!
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 19:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so well written that there are no words to describe what a wonderful experience it was to dicover it in my search. Who ever comes across this story in their search please do as my review title says and READ IT! Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 11:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please upload the NC-17 rated version if this one was awesome what would that one be like. Do it,Do it, Do it, Do it, Do it. Please
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Title: Miroku&Sango
Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 18:03 EST
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Hint: Miroku already proposed to Sango in the manga and Sango accepted and it's Shippou not Shippo go to: www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/ you'll figure it out when you get there refer other people to the aforementioned site, put it in the end of your next chappie maybe. Just do it, or you will suffer a slow and painfully painful death. And Sesshoumaru belongs to me. And if you don't update soon, I'll unleash the dark and evil powers of Randomness Space on you and you will be forced to update/write fics until your soul wastes away. So update. Now.
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Title: unbreak my heart
Reviewed By: cripzbabi On: September 12, 2003 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a few misspelled wrosz but the fic waz great!!!!! can't wait ot read the next chapter!!!! |
Reviewed By: wow On: April 19, 2003 22:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
great story |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 16, 2003 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i checked yesterday an' i was so excited tat u put in tha last chp.!!!! i'm so happy i read it an' i was like i liked tha end. but i wish u put in a bit more detail an' a lil' more fluff (juss a tad lil') to make it all special. or like u coulda wrote wat happened when tha lil' family goes into kagome's house. u kno? aite. well i like ur story? an' is there gonna be more chp. or was tat really tha end? k. jus wanted u to kno i loved tha WHOLE story!!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 00:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
Epilogue, epilogue, epilogue! |
Reviewed By: NightShadow On: April 13, 2003 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT job!!!! That was a great story! Can't wait for your next one to come out. Keep up the GREAT work!!!!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: thalian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 16:58 EDT
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great story but one thing ya gotta do is a epilogue hehe |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 05, 2003 19:05 EST
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What a great story. So many interesting twists. Emotions are running rampant with everyone. I can't wait to see how everything ends up. |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 05, 2003 14:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i really thought ur story was kewl...i can't wait till tha next chp. i like how u made a lot o' conflict between tha two. keeps it up! ^-^ |
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