| "Unbreak My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: sarah86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2011 22:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was cute but i was hopeing kagome mite have real gone to the dark side oh well it was still good and fun to read i like it so much it's on my fav's now. |
Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 22:04 EDT
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i really loved it!!!!!!!!!! keep up the wonderful workXD lol
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Title: Kawaii
Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome Super KAWAII write... i loved how everything came out... between shippo and everything... its sad Kaede passed tho... anyway great write... laters
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Title: Unbreak my heart & untold secrets
Reviewed By: inuXnaruto1fan On: May 19, 2005 02:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo, wut up, this is kom wit duh 411! lol! jk, i just read both of these fanfics, and i gotta say, THERE WICKED AWSOME DUDE!!! the "unbreak my heart" was by far my favorite. Kagome was evil, hehehe...and Untold secrets im still readin, on chap 0.12, its kool so far, but since its to late, i was gonna see if u would name kagomes and inuyashas children Naruto or Sakura, hehe =)so the point is...UR AWSOME!!! my email is komyarmoghadam@hotmail.com EMAIL ME!!! ILL KEEP READING! HAHAHA!!!INU RULZ,NARUTO RULZ!!!! /laughs meniacly in corner
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (notloggedin) On: March 05, 2005 14:24 EST
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omg this has to be one of the cutest stories ive read! i really liked how you portrayed each of the characters emotions. great job :D
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Reviewed By: Huntress19 On: March 04, 2005 17:09 EST
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I would very much like to read the other version that you have if you would be so kind as to send it to my E-mail. GGelvin_goddess@hotmail.com I really like your story so far and I hope you continue it.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: March 02, 2005 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol when I first saw this on the search page, it had 48 pages and 48 reviews :P but now..because of ME it is now 48 pages and 49 reviews! oh well...this is an AWESOME fic, no serius grammatical mistakes, good spelling, and an intriguing storyline...keep up the fantastic work!
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Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 02, 2005 15:14 EST
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What an adorable ending! The cute little family representing both Human and Youkai...and a very immature father-figure! LOL -- The synopsis of InuYasha giving his 'son' "The Talk" sounds like fun! Especially with Miroku's hentai input...gonna be a riot! Hehe...Loved it!!
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Title: Just finished chapter 10...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an interestine story and plot. The most distressing dilemma that seems to be going on is a deplorable lack of communication. *shakes head* When two unbelievably stubborn people refuse to 'talk it out' and make decisions for the 'good' of the other person, however well intentioned...you get massive FUBAR (fouled up beyond all recognition) "Damage control people!! Snap to it!" LoL -- I don't want to rag on typos or misspelling (not everyone is a diction nazi like myself so I play it cool, hehe) but you called InuYasha's Forest "Inuyasha no Fukai" and I believe you want the word "Mori" (unfortunately the site I use for word translation is having difficulties so I'm crossing my fingers! :P ) -- Well, on to the rest of the story!! Great job so far.
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Title: Unbreak my heart
Reviewed By: Kagome01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 13:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like your FanFic very much and I can just say: I want more. Your grammar isn't that good, but since mine isn't perfect either I'll say nothing about it. Maybe you could improve it. Your Kagome01
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:32 EDT
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A very nice story. Lots of, ah, emotions - for lack of a better word. However, I did want to clean InuYasha mouth out with a bar of soap.
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Reviewed By: *stars* On: August 29, 2004 05:08 EDT
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i think i've gone blind from reading it.
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Reviewed By: holy geez On: August 23, 2004 04:39 EDT
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oh god that was long...my eyes hurt
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Title: heart broken
Reviewed By: kagome's angel On: June 20, 2004 22:42 EDT
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just by reading the first two chapters it made me cry because kagome had to maKE A BIG CHOICE LEAVING INUYASHA so it got me perrity sad keep up the good work ^ ^ -
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Reviewed By: kagome' On: June 20, 2004 22:37 EDT
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