| "Unbreak My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just have to update really really soon ok i just love this story, i love it so much i was actually crying!!!!!!!!!! Please UPDATE!!!!!
~luv ya~ |
Reviewed By: Jess On: March 10, 2003 16:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to read more! (^_^) |
Reviewed By: kk On: March 09, 2003 17:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this..please continue |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: March 09, 2003 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT THROUGHOUT THE FIC IT REALLY EFFECTED ME I GOT A SHIVER THEN I STARTED TO SCRATCH MY NECK OR MY ARMS. DAMN IMAGINE I WERE PUT INTO A REAL LIFE SITUATION AS ANY OF THOSE. SOMEONE WOULD PROBABLY THINK I HAVE CHICKEN POX OR SOMETHING. THE FIC IS GREAT AND VERY BELIEVABLE. WHEN KAEDE DIED I REALLY DON'T KNOW Y I FELT SAD..I WAS HIT WITH A NOTION. 'EVERYTHING MUST DIE AND WITH IT SO MUST HAPPINESS'...I THINK. KEEP UPDATING. |
Reviewed By: Serenestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 13:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like!! Hope you continue |
Reviewed By: Love-your-fic On: March 08, 2003 11:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! I read it first on ff.net but am very happy to see the unedited version here :=)
Umm..chapter4, you say you have to edited it out b/c it's NC-17 and have to settle for R
Can you post the unedited, NC-17 version here? MediaMiner have no restriction after all
Please ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Nemisis On: March 08, 2003 08:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You better update... soon
or me and my vast array of throwing weapons will play target practice |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
%$*^%#$&%#$%$#*^%$(&^%*&^(*(&*_(*&*&^&^$&^$&%^$^%$, I hate clifhangers but I love this story because Inu Yasha acts like Inu Yasha but kagome on the other hand needs to smoke a bowl and calm the fuck down keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: ryogachan21 On: March 07, 2003 23:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fanfic! I can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you up date really soon! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:49 EST
Comment/Review:
P.s will you please read my "Kooraru"
Please!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You Better Update!!!!!!!
Or You will be sorry!!!!!!!
AND I MEAN IT!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sayuri On: March 07, 2003 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! ;_; I am such a sucker for Inu Yasha/Kagome romances, but...
Anywho, I think posting the NC-17 version would be a good idea. As a fellow author, I understand the pains of censorship. So fight it! =D |
Reviewed By: angle4u2nv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 19:04 EST
Comment/Review:
i really like it so update as fast as you can k bye |
Reviewed By: NightShadow131 On: May 07, 2003 16:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT JOB!!!!! I loved it!! GREAT ending too!! I think you should write the sequel. Keep up the GREAT work and UPDATE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: halanbl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, I love this! Its so cute! The story is very well written with only a few grammatical errors that I can see. And I love that you chose Souten as Shippou's mate, I thought I was the only one who remembered Souten drawing a picture of a handsome adult Shippou complete with little hearts around his head. I must admit that its one of my favorite episodes. As always, update! ;) |
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