| "Take My Memories Away" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 22:36 CDT
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update update!
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Reviewed By: lituska_silvermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 03:26 CST
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Glad to see you updated :) been dying to read what happened next and you havent dissapointed... the former lovers meet...cant wait to see what fireworks you have planned...
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 16:03 CST
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YAY update ^_^...aaaahhhh GREAT the scene with Aya and Shoji in the bar, uuuhhhh ^.~! Oh, that's mean, such a situation and you stop HERE O_O...*sob* *is crying theatrically*^.~ you are soooooo mean...*hehe* ^_^. Waiii, of course I want a AYYA badge thanx ^_______^! OK, you know that you have to post the next part as soon as possible, ne...PLEASE! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: Talyssa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 03:15 CST
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w00h00!!!! ::dancedanceboogie:: This is getting good. >.<
In all honestly I completely forgot all about this fic (sorry sorry) but now i'm back in the groove! I think your writing has improved compared to your earlier stories too by the way. Now you know what they say, practice makes perfect. Which is a really subtle way of saying "write a lot more!!!!!" Or maybe not so subtle. ^_^; Ganbatte kudasai! Ouenshiteimasu!
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Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals* You finally updated this!!! Great job, Shaeric. I nearly died when Aya ran into Shoji, literally. ^_^ Hurry with more soon!
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Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really, really interesting orginal idea. I was ready to throttle Aya for being dense at the beginning of the first chapter, then Manx for sending Yuushi there. The last chapter was really good. I enjoyed seeing the Black Panther personality coming to the front and pretty much finally learning about him. I'm waiting to see what happens in the next chapter with him and Aya. For as much as it is embedded in him to hate red heads, he seems to be developing something for Aya.. and for his one teammate.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 12:52 CST
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Yeah. I'm glad this is back! Very good chapter. Loved Shoji's accessment of his team. Aya's startled reaction to seeing Shoji. And a new family enemy ... good! Tokyo can't be cursed with just one corrupted family! I'm liking this a lot and can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Krimstorm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 07:47 CST
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Ughhhh... *drooooool* Such delicious imagery should come with a Surgeon Generals warning on it...
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Reviewed By: scented Candles On: July 04, 2003 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so sorry i wasn't able use my computer for the longest time and i only now just reactivated my E-mail account so...anyway as usual great fic and i am so looking forward to reading more! i'm using someone else's cmputer right now 'coz my internet is still busted. but anyway, great fic and please continue! |
Reviewed By: lituska_silvermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 11:24 CDT
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Wonderfully written and well plotted... extremely original idea but it works! :)
Can not wait to see where this goes...
Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Pandora On: April 27, 2003 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, where's the next chapter?? I'm on pins and needles here! I really enjoyed the amount of guilt youre putting Aya thru, esp. after what he said to poor Yotan. And youre descriptive alteration of Yotan is quite good. I can't wait for these two to encounter one another soon! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 17, 2003 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! You HAVE to continue this soon...The plotline is SO intriguing and DIFFERENT. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sooo loving this, Shaeric. To see Yohji in a whole new light this way is just wonderful. This fic has the promise of being very complicated and angst-filled. I can't wait to see more. |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: April 07, 2003 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god...you nearly had me crying at the end of the first chap...where Aya was holding the pillow and said "I miss you Yohji"!
I'm so sorry for him, but why he had to betray him (my grammar sucks-_-...gomen!)*sigh*...Aya Aya...you are so complicated you know that -_-.
BUT...I have hope^^...not only because I saw the...*argh* how to say it *sweatdrop*...pairings above, at the top of the chap (O__O...I hope you can understand me -_-''), that Yohji and Aya are getting back together again ^_^!
You know, when I first read the plot I did't want to read it *stupid me stupid me* *BAKA BAKA BAKA*...*sigh* I don't know why...maybe I can't stand the fact...that Yohji and another one but Aya getting together^^. I'm happy I did read it ^_^!!!
Interesting story^^and much more ^_~...keep it up the good work^.^ and make us all happy in writing the next chaps as soon as possible^.^...I'm stressing you, eh-_-''...gomen!
Ja *me too me too...wants to wave the AYYA banner too^.^*...*is shyly doing it* ^____^
Koji-chan
P.S.: I really really look forward the meeting (that sounds odd^^) between the Shadow team^^ and Weiß ^_____^! (more exactly *whisper whisper*...Aya x Shoji/Yohji^^) |
Reviewed By: Talyssa On: April 07, 2003 13:21 CDT
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waaaaaa That was too short! I've been waiting for the continuation of this fic for so long. I hope it all comes together soon, I want to know what happens! |
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