| "Mine to Take" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 02:08 EDT
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Aw, I liked that. Not sure what else to say. ^^;
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Title: WHOA!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is...HOLY MOTHER LORD THAT WAS FRIGGIN AWESOME! THAT WAS SO COOL I ALMOST WET MY PANTS! (not really, jut for added effect.) But, seriously, that was majorly awesome and cool and I just loved your lemon! I loves lemons, and your lemon is definetly in my top five.
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 18:44 EST
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lemons are good for the soul !!!!
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Reviewed By: Hellwise [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 09:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the few good lemon fics that I have stumbled across. Very well done.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 19:09 EDT
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how do u make such great fics? u have some kind of talent
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Reviewed By: mistress25 On: October 01, 2003 13:17 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an excellent read. Inuyasha and Kagome belong together. Please make a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 11:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story,I have always wanted my husband to sneak up on me like that. Now i don't feel so alone with these hentai thoughts. You have to write more about kagome taking Inuyasha in his sleep. I justed loved the whole Idea. ^_~
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Reviewed By: HentaiGoddess On: September 13, 2003 15:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would just like to say... WOW!! That was one amazing fan fic |
Reviewed By: samiam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 20:35 EDT
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Second fanfic of yours I've read today and just as GREAT!!! as the first!!WOW, you do have a way with words!! I think I'll get that cold drink now^_^ ME |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 23:25 EDT
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whoa i liked! good job! |
Reviewed By: Priestess_of_the_Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2003 06:27 EDT
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That was so cool. You are my new hero. I know most people don't think Inuyasha would do something like that, but personally I think he just needs the right motivation or frustration. I liked your story so much I can'6t stop smiling. Jeez but I have a dirty mind sometimes, but then again so do you. Ja ne! I hope I'll be seeing lots more from you soon! |
Reviewed By: Cold Fire Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Yes, enjoyment and overall are also ten, as far as I am concerned. I find it really. . . Interesting. . . How vividly Kagome dreams. *grin* Poor girl, poor hanyou. . . And I wouldn't exactly term that a 'rude' awakening as much as an 'eye opening' one. Literally. 'Twas most fun to see how you pulled that particular situation together, though really you must wonder at how dead asleep everyone was. Kagome must have thought she was having one heck of a fantasy! Though truely you more or less say as much, with her comment on needing a midnight cold stream-dipping. Which sounds ackward when I type as much. Oh well. Once more there is a well-said overtone to the entire story, and not vulgarity per say. In cheesy words, making love, not having sex. No. . . I don't even make sense to myself at times. For once, or mayhap twice, you have written a one-shot that can fully stand alone and not have others absolutely begging for a continuation! Not that this will stop most people anyhow, but what happens happens.
May life inspire, may tall objects not present you with places from which to fall and cause yourself bodily injury, and may those lemon dealers out there do the same. Or something. And I must agree with everstar - A pity you can't do this for a living. Just think of all the money you could earn!
Aloha.
Phoenix of the Cold Fire |
Reviewed By: Jaxxia7 On: April 11, 2003 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wondeful. This is the way Inu Yasha and Kagome were meant to be together. But I think Kagome should have woke up sooner. |
Reviewed By: everstar On: March 30, 2003 15:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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My only question is... how did Kagome manage to sleep through that? She must've been really tired, poor kid.
The circumstances are, as mentioned, a little disturbing, but it didn't bother me when I was reading - only when I thought about it later.
Excellent work, as usual. It's a pity you can't do this for a living. ;) |
Reviewed By: Umi2583 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 02:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm not sure if I consider this sweet or exciting, but I love it! Ookami-chan you have the best fics!! ^_^ I hope you keep writing---did I tell you that you do wonderful lemons?? =D |
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