| "Mine to Take" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
| Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
Title: O.o?
Reviewed By: relenabarton [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2012 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've read some of your other work and I've liked it a lot but this...I can't...there is a 4-letter word for what Inuyasha did here: rape. I usually like that he's all cocky and rough because under it he's sensitive and sweet. Here he was just a chauvinistic pig that raped Kagome in her sleep. Her reaction left me stunned, at first I thought she was still sleepy and kind of in shock but I can't reconcile her reaction with the Kagome I know. Overall it was a well written story but just not my cup of tea. |
Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 00:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm afraid I'm going to have to agree with FrameofMind, on this one, really not cool. There's a few differences between sex and rape, and I definitely think the big one is not giving consent. I don't really care if she was having a sexy dream about him, Kagome didn't know what was going on, and she lost her choice in how she lost her virginity. That was taken from her by InuYasha, who I don't like to be seen in such a controlling, manipulative light. I like your other work, but I'm afraid this one gets a thumbs down.
|
Title: wow
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... that was good!!
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 07:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...
|
Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooo!!!!!! LOL. Well now InuYasha is Mr.Cocky lol. ^_^ I loved it.
|
Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 22:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
This was amazing! You are truly talented! I loved it. I'm absolutly in love with the posessive side of InuYasha's nature, so it's good to finally find a well written story using that so ardently. Wonderful work!
|
Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was recommended to me and am so glad it was. WHOOOO!!!If I still smoked, Id be a having one right about now, lol. This was excellent. I loved it. Heh, and no-one woke up through it all. You have a wonderful style and a way of telling a tale, one could actually see them. And that's not easy to do. Again, most excellent.
|
Title: Brilliant!
Reviewed By: inu-yashaxkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 17:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Two words: loved it. I simply loved this story. It was very good and one of my favorite lemons. Bravo!
|
Reviewed By: Leomae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 01:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
Umm... I'm probably not the only who has noticed this but what's up with Ryen and playing favorites? I mean the guy just automatically is nicer to Sess than Inu and aside from the "moment" they had in Kyushu he hasn't said a single nice thing to the boy at all. And you know what else he always gets beat up for shit that happens to Rin when most of it is her own damn fault and she should have to live up to it. Inu's probably gonna get beat up over this stunt of her's too. but seriously in my opinion Ryen really just doesn't seem to like inu. He tlks about having this huge list of things to apologize to Sess for and yet he's only said sry to Inu once!!!! WTF man WTF!!!! *sigh otherwise the story is great keep up the good work and updat soon ja!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 00:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
AWWW.. man, i love this one shot!!! it's just...amazing!!! very, very well done. though i have to say i think i would pop any guy with the audacity who said i was theirs to take without concent....but i mean...he is inuyasha and he is gorgious....sooooo....i'll let him off for that one. very well done!!!
|
Reviewed By: FrameofMind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 01:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
I gotta say, I like a lot of your stuff, but this one crosses a line. By the end of the fic, I didn't like Inuyasha (which is quite unusual, because most of the time I'm madly in love with him), and I had lost all respect for Kagome. What self-respecting woman would allow any man to do that to her without her consent -- regardless of what she feels for him -- with no repercussions whatsoever? She hits him for laughing at her, but not for raping her in her sleep? And I know Inuyasha's always arrogant, but that arrogance only works because it conceals a deeper vulnerability. Here, (at least in the end) there was none of that -- he was just being a pig. In short, I found it shallow and (I hate to say this, because it makes me sound prissy, which I'm really not...) somewhat offensive.
|
Reviewed By: Bate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 12:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, yes, me likey.... Heh, heh, heh... A very well written fic!
|
Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another awsome piece of work
|
Reviewed By: Jen928 On: August 09, 2005 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That fic was... amazingly great. Who knows what would have happened, had I been here by myself. I only wish I was. Your fic has it's own special folder in my favorites. I've actually read this twice, once last night too. Cuz it's just that good! I think I'm going to go take... a nice cold shower...
|
Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 22:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
Holy hell... Hotness on a plate... That was genius. Excellent job.
|
| Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
