| "Mine to Take" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: everstar On: March 30, 2003 15:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
My only question is... how did Kagome manage to sleep through that? She must've been really tired, poor kid.
The circumstances are, as mentioned, a little disturbing, but it didn't bother me when I was reading - only when I thought about it later.
Excellent work, as usual. It's a pity you can't do this for a living. ;) |
Reviewed By: Umi2583 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 02:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm not sure if I consider this sweet or exciting, but I love it! Ookami-chan you have the best fics!! ^_^ I hope you keep writing---did I tell you that you do wonderful lemons?? =D |
Reviewed By: dreambraider [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 23:14 EST
Comment/Review:
Thank you again for putting my mind in the correct hentai frame. Love your new story and hope you keep up the good work. Keep writing. Pretty please??? |
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 04:28 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cool and beautiful!!!
This is a great lemon, you've got a great style!
I Hope you'll write a sequel. |
Reviewed By: lere On: March 23, 2003 20:53 EST
Comment/Review:
Well, Ookami-chan atacks again, hun? My luck i guess because I just love your on-shot lemons. They are very sexy but not dirt. And I just love the way you put the details, slow and sensual. Very good! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 00:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very excelent read. I hope I see more of your work |
Reviewed By: dragonrose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was just wandering around seeing if there was anything interesting to read... and i found this... i read the entire thing... then looked at the author name... my first thought... it figures... the best things ive read have been your writing and this is no exception |
Reviewed By: aurora_skys On: March 22, 2003 20:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, good job! keep writing and thanks for making a great lemon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Paradisum On: March 22, 2003 19:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my...this has got to be one of the most erotic and sensual scenes that I have ever read..the heat, the lust, the possession...it was all so precious..I loved it!!! |
Reviewed By: love your stories ^_^ On: March 22, 2003 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Ookami-chan, you did it again ^_^ Very very lemony, but I did enjoy your other one-shots a tad more. But wait! Don't leave! This was excellent too! I love your writing style, and I hope you write more yummy lemons in the near future! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: angle4u2nv On: March 22, 2003 15:06 EST
Comment/Review:
how did you come up with that it was brilliant and yuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmyyyyyyy |
Reviewed By: inlover On: March 22, 2003 14:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh yes really good its storys like these that make you a lemon goddess. this story is different and not like one i've seen so far. really original so keep it up. :) |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO YOU THINK YOU CAN MAKE ONE WITH SANGO AND MIROKU?!??!?!? ^.^)>
P.s please read my story "Kooraru" please ^(^.^)^ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 08:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't have as much fun reading this one as I did U.O. or L.S., and the but certainly of the style and quality that we've come to expect from this author.
The circumstances do disturb me a bit, not so easily written off as in Unexpected, but this piece of fiction is vivid, entertaining and -- what's the wor-- ah yes: yummy. |
Reviewed By: Yxonomei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 20:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Delicious. |
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